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Chibi Pandora 12/27/02 . chapter 1
AW! ;_; She jumped. You said it was a death fic, but still! _
CruelAngelThesis 5/1/02 . chapter 1
Spelling, grammar, and formatting errors abounding! Also, a little more story may have made this a little less sudden. Maybe having Heero announce that he didn't love Relena should have been first, then have the beginning of this story come after that. With the negatives out of the way... The character interaction didn't seemed forced. I liked the concept. Maybe I don't read enough GW fanfiction, but I rarely ever see a Relena-copes after a Relena-finds-out fic. I LOVED the plot twist at the very end. As said, I think this story could've used a little more story in it, such as after Heero told Relena off, how he got together with Duo. And why Heero still cares? These answers would make this a little more coherent. Other than those things, great story! I hope to read more good things from you! Jaa -
budiamond 4/14/02 . chapter 1
No! Not Relena!

*Wipes away tear* Poor Heero...gawd he's stupid.

He shoulda said from the start. Now he'll be sad and Duo will be too.

Aw and thanks for reviewing DSCT...Oopss. Dreams shouldn't come true even though I'm not half as good a writer as you are!

You're way way better O.o
Relena Peace 4/10/02 . chapter 1
Oh God...I think i'm going to cry! That was sooo seriously sad! OMG! Okay, now I am crying. Gosh, that was soo sad it was depressingly horrable! But good, so good of a fic. Okay, now I am going to go cry over my boyfriend now, *sigh*...this fic reminds me of our situation...Great job BTW
Silver Wing 4/2/02 . chapter 1
That was weird...
Niome-Chan 4/2/02 . chapter 1
Dear Kitahoshi,

Ouch, poor Heero!

Nice twist though, you're getting really good at this. You'll be a great journalist yet! I think that you really out did yourself this time. I hope that this will be a ood start to a great career.

Your partner in crime,

Niome

P.S. Ha! can't write a good review, eh? But I reallt meant all of it :)
Hitomi 4/2/02 . chapter 1
I like it but umm continue please! i want to see what heero will do!

Hitomi
shime 4/2/02 . chapter 1
but but but but but but but o-o; speechless. i prfer 1x2, really, but nice. a nice twist to a 1x2, R1 ficcie, hmmmmm _
shinigami girl2 4/1/02 . chapter 1
awwww... *sob sob* that was a sad fic... *sniff sniff* but it was nice too... *blows nose* good job... T_T...
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