So beautiful and sweet. I mean Rinoa cries a lot here but hey still a very nice thought of her to sneak into Squall's room to sate her need to see him. Typical and lovely Rinoa. The hot-tempered yet lovely princess next door that isn't afraid to give you a piece of her mind and then make you want to hold her until you stop breathing.

Well done I was touched by Squall's response too.

Cheers

Keep Writing

Aww.. another beautiful work by you. This was sweet and touching. I loved how you conveyed the emotions that Rinoa felt and Squall being so understanding about her need for comfort. You definitely have skill when it comes to describing these situations. I'm proud.

Another masterpiece... so touching, Im almost in tears. Great work as usual. Keep it up!

So touching.

That's all I have to say.

Also,

Well-done. _

this has to be one of my all time favourite stories, it's so in character and i love the simple setting of the story.

aw! That is so sweet! One of the sweetest things I have ever ever read! It was so romantic and cute! And it was perfect and your such a good writer!

Love

Rachel

I love your stories, you're a really talented author.

Hey, Luna Manar! I didn't know you were on here! I saw your stories on and I reckonized this one 'cause I just reviewed it! Anywho ... it's quite the good story and I loved it but word to the wise: NO NOTEPADS! I was confused like crazy until I figured out that the thoughts were supposed to be italicized and 'pad wasn't picking it up.

ROARING TIGER! Aka: 9.7

Like your story!

Beautiful rendering of their emotions, conveying strong feelings of their need for closeness & comforting. I am always amazed at your talent in decribing a moment with such vividity. Good work.

Gurr. I can't imagine what it must be like to be able to write fics like this-if I TRIED to do a Squinoa, I'd get too disgusted with my sappy self to continue.

Er... that wasn't an insult or ank kind of degrading remark, just FYI. This piece... it's tremendously written, just like all your others. I'm just allergic to romance without a good compliment of nonromantic action. Sorry.

Kudos for yet ANOTHER job well done...

...whatever

I like that line, "Not like I had a problem with it 2 minutes ago." hehehe That was very romantic and mushy lovey-dovey... I loved it! Wow, to think 2 weeks later, it shows how traumatizing that was for her, to see him like that and how she kept reliving it in her mind. Nice that Squall was so understanding.

very touching

Good fic!Is this gonna be the only chapter?Cuz if it is,then you gotta continue!The Squinoa action is cute and touching...awww,the ending was great...