You have a great handle on the character and scene.

This is fantastic! Will Lennox won my heart early in the movie (probably my favorite human character, although Epps and Keller are right behind him), but the scene where he chose Sam (and the Autobots) remains one of the best scenes in the entire movie. And this story more than does him justice.

The plot is interesting from your Lennox-style POV. I don't completely know Will's character, but this could very well be what was going on through his mind.

Still…I wonder why the movie had them hide the Cube in the city, a heavily populated area, instead of in a place that was secure enough and far away from civilians. Hmm…

Anyway, nice work! _0

Wow, that was...epic...:D

Love it as I love all of the Introductions. Adding to 'Not-So-Little-Green-Men'. Faving. There's not much more I can do to prove how awesome I find this series.

Great piece, and a marvelous fill-in piece! I'm especially impressed with two things: the way you capture the different voices of the characters (Lennox has his own distinct sound, and could never be confused with Ironhide or Sam or anyone else), and the way you show Lennox' ever-shifting analysis of the situation. It's interesting to watch his perspective change as he classifies and re-classifies those around him as liabilities, assets, and allies, and tries to figure out how they relate to each other and him.

I like the point of view here. Good job

I like it.

And all I did was alpha read and offer two IDs on hardware and an alternative interpretation of data. *blush*

I love the conclusion to this piece. It's spot on.

Oh that was great! I love how Lennox analyzed everything. Wonder what he thought when he found out the big one had made it back and was in charge. i think I would have liked that too but I get this was about him and his thoughts about Jazz. Thanks for writing!

Very nice! Will is very believable in this one-shot. I consider this very well done.

This is a fascinating and moving take on those missing scenes and POV.

Really loved this. Great work bringing us into the mind of a soldier.

Love, love, loved Lennox's pov! More please?

Wow! Love this story. Well done!