A lot of potential here. Delving in to the sympathetic side of a very difficult villain to understand is always hard, and you did a remarkable job of it. Keep writing!

I wonder with Gothel's last breath, will she actually feel sorry.

I think Gothel never was COMPLETELY bad. Bad, but not the worst. And in some matter she really did love Rapunzel. I really like how you described her feelings. "Waiting to reunite with my flower." Baaaw, so cute!

That was pretty sweet, though I'm sure she did have evil intentions at the end.

That's cute.

I love how she can be apologetic yet sarcastic - (Freakin' chameleon!).

Great job!

Hey, that was realy cute. I like the way you let mother G talk!

Plus it was funny too!