god this was so good. wowow

I must admit, I'm torn on this fic - the writing is utterly gorgeous and haunting, and I love the:

Normally torn, shattered, with pieces twisted and missing, but tonight, while I am here, I am whole, strong, right now, I am flawless.

bit. My only issue is that, to me, it doesn't read like...Grace. It's beautiful, don't get me wrong, but it doesn't really feel like Grace to me.

I just wanted to thank you for writin some Jake/Grace! There are not many out out there, and I always like to have many choices in pairings So, thanks for introducing a little originality in this Avatar section ;)

PS: Could you write something longer than a one-shot? Because it doesn't satisfy my hunger for this pairing " Thanks :)

Oh my god. Words can't express how much I love this. And you for posting this. I think this is our first complete, officially Jake/Grace story in this fandom (at least on this website, I can't speak for other places).

This was really well written. It seriously made my day. Great job.

(Can you tell how sick I am of everything else in this fandom? Haha.)

Emotional, moving, superb.

The superlative vagueness definitely adds to the story.