*reads reviews* Hmmm This ight be good! 8D

*reads it* I LOVE YOU

This is among one of my favorite fan fictions EVER.

Lovely job man.

I'll tell you something: you took awkwardness normally associated with this kind of fanfiction, you beat the crap out of it and transformed it into something incredibly admirable-but you knew that already, didn't you?

And there's also the creativity such as Wheatley's references and his hull sensitivity which allow you writing room. I commend you on taking advantage of that room.

The only-howdoIsaythis- "turn-off", for lack of a better word, was the 'loopy grin' on Chell's face. Every time you mentioned it, I thought about the "Pudding Face" commercials from Jell-O -and I'm sad to say that I burst out laughing at that. Search "pudding face" yourself and you will see why.

(I am also shocked that I unconsciously placed your description 'volume increase' in my own story. I'm a little ashamed of that.)

Overall, this story is very unique, lacks 'uncomfortable' words (thank God), and is one of the very few M fanfics which I greatly enjoy.

Well done.

That was amazing

I honestly wasn't expecting that to be so damn sexy. Seriously good job on this.

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I love this holy god

The whole time I was reading this I was thinking, "Lucky Chell :c" Then I read "Symptoms of human female arousal include..." and I laughed.

Very well done! You did a great job with Wheatley's character, everything from his awkwardness to his speech patterns! I never thought this pairing could work if he wasn't humanized in some form, but this fic has proven me wrong. Nice work! :)

DarkLvmj: "Oh wow..." blushes. "Oh Wheately you are a charmer! Excellent story! I dearly hope my co-writer Lvmj won't mind if I add this to favorites. He doesn't read things like this, unless he does it in secret...heeheehee. Now I wish I have a Wheatley to cuddle with on those oh so 'cold' nights!"

-DarkLvmj

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My 2 fav stories on kink meme BOTH turn out to be written by you?

MARRY ME.•-•

call me perverted but i enjoyed the sexy bits ,wheatly was spot on, and if i recalled correctly in an interview it was said Chell "could" talk, but why would you want to talk to an evil a.i?

i would love to see more, as in a story following this one,

did glados see this? are there other cores that saw it?

do they try to put this incident behind them?

MORE WHEATLYXCHELL GOD DAM IT!

it pleases me and others, for now and the future!

Cave Johnson where done here...

Well, that was, interesting.

I liked Wheatley's attitude about it. And that you kept in mind that he is a non-human and non-organic lifeform.

I find the idea of a human and a robot/AI having a relationship interesting(and how the physical/emotional/intellectual love would work between the two), but a great majority of Portal-fanfics just totally ignores this, and either make them human, or respond like ones.

This definitely deserves more attention then it's gotten. I mean really, this is the best robot!wheatleyxchell I've ever seen. Steamy, emotional, humorous, and you captured the characters perfectly.

If it's two things I never read, it's technophilia and female masturbation.

But I read this and loved every second of it. Not only is it well written and in character (hard enough to find in the Portal fandom) but humorous while being rather adorable. Keep up the good work!

great one-shot. wanna make a story out of it?