you have a cute plot here. but at the beginning it was quite confusing because the characters were not introduced properly. and you need to be careful with the script format you used, FFNET deleted my fic because it was in the script format so i suggest you save a copy of this fic and all the reviews.

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Thanx 4 finishing the fic! Good Job!

I know it's kinda late to review ur story, but please make another chapter! I know u got some bad reviews but at least continue it 4 the ppl who like it. If u don't want to post another chapter at least email the next one to me, PLEASE!

gee... that was quite, er- sorry ah/

if it's a lil too late to review ur ever first fic but i just couldn't help it ever since i saw DEVIL'S review...

gee dude ka rin! you don't even know how to appreciate!

you're scared of being burnt in hell that's why you covered ur face in a non signed-up member...

anyweiss... i love the fic! it siuts kurama and yes,

it is Shuuichi hehe... i love yah Bunj'z!

take care now... even though yah don't know me...

Savior

Hey, don't get dicouraged because of what the 'old timers' say. They need to try and remeber how hard it was to make fanfics when they started out. Keep writing I love this story.

Hey ice cream! [i wonder if the people understand what I've just said...] I didn't know you had a soft spot for dear old Mr. Rico Yan. Gosh, God bless his soul.

Anyway, to tell you the truth, I have NO idea what anime this fic was based upon. Seriously, I don't know what bloody anime this is! But still I took effort to read it! And now I'm reviewing. Man it was su-weet! BUT my head hurt coz of all the diff. letters. What does it mean? Anyway there. This is sweet I tell you! Anyway, now that I took effort to read YOUR story you should go read AND REVIEW mine! you better, or else...Heehee! Oh yeeah, if you do review, don't you friggin' dare say that MY danny sucks! Just give me a break k? *wink*

DANIEL RADCLIFFE PA RIN NOH! HAHAHAHAHA!

What do you mean? Kurama's getting married?

insomnia's getting me ...

Aaaghh... too lazy to sign in... all I can say is... wow! Umm... okay...!

Hi there! So you're a Filipino too, huh? Well... your fic was...sorry, but a bit weird? The characters were OOC...saka nakakalito kung sino yung nagsasalita...puro "K", "H", "Y" lang kasi nilalagay mo. Next time try to type in the whole name. It'd save the readers a lot of agony.

Oh Hello! heheh, i luv your fic! i didn't know that hiei cud be like that! _ btw, do you know any sites with hunterxhunter fics?

yea, i think rico is like that too...

hey,you're a pinoy too?gee,smll wrld.

neway,the story's kinda just about hisoka,but also the fact that hiei's ooc and also the rest of the at least its not a SI fic coz those are the WORST fics least it doesn't look like yes,it is annoyingly me weird but i prefer your style coz it's faster to read and the world does need hunter x hunter what the world doesn't need are kurama 're EVERYWHERE!

oh shit, you're a filipino? *smirks* damnit, you're giving your race a bad name.

first of all, it's Shuuichi, and Britinia is certainly not a japanese name. most of the characters are OOC, especially kurama. the plot isn't confusing, it's just plain shallow. and i woulnd't actually consider it favorable to write in script form since they aren't the best choice for literature (though yours is surely a poor excuse).

ey man, i'm betting you're a guy. i dunno why, but i've got a feeling.

damn, you oughta be ashamed of yourself. there are a lot of good filipino writers here and you're surely not one of them.

This is a review. Just a review so you DON'T, I repeat DON'T have to take this personally. I think the fic's ok but I kinda got confused on who's K and KAZ. I also didn't get the whole concept since you made the fic into the script type. Don't worry...I can say it's a 7 in my list.

(In case you're wondering...si Charlie to!)

hahahha... i can't do anything,,, so i review my own work! cool? ne... stupidity!

please come by and review my work... maybe it's borin' cozz it has a different style and some words are really basic language but... what the hey! that's what makes it unique! lav yah'! oh and... WEASLEYS RULE ALONG WITH KURAMA!

I luv u my dear brothers! so,,, gottaparkmepen! boo-boo..majin-boo!(",)