I like it a lot so far. I personally, 3 constructive critisim, so after looking carefully for some advice to give, I decided that Balto is a bit too rebellious, close to being sterotyped (but she isn't, don't worry) and she should have a girly moment (like get a makeover from Ariel, like people have been saying) This story is wonderful though, and I had to look VERY close for that microscopic flaw.
Keep writing!

This is really good! Balto should fall in love with one of the guys she works with and she shud have a make over from Ariel. Ariel should really bond with balto and they should have a moment together where some emotional stuff should come out. Please continue!

I'm now starting to see if this movie was made where Ren actually DID have a sister in Footloose (in another life, of course), I know JUST the person who can play her- Linda Blair.

Very nice.

I can almost see how Balto dressing like Bryan Adams and wearing a baseball cap backwards seems a little reminiscent of Alex Mack to me. And it's really cute how her name would imply on how she ate a chicken leg like a dog.

I also think it would have been more interesting if you wrote that the cop called Ren "a little shit" instead of "boy" where they were pulled over by those fuckers.

AWESOME chapter please update soon thanx D i think later in the chapters have Balto get a whole new make over from Ariel and Rusty.

can't wait to read some more :)

I LOVE THIS STORY please update soon thanx D

hurry up and write more!

I like it a lot I really like sidter fics keep up the good work

I'm really enjoying this story so far. You've kept Ren perfectly in character, and Balto is so well written that I can actually imagine her having a part in the movie itself.

I can't wait for another chapter