Poor Lloyd u.u

I like how you describe his first time in the car, his thoughts are very realistic all the time. And the end is sad.

(Sorry for the mistakes, English is not my first language)

Wow. This was perfect. You captured Lloyd so well, the story was incredibly believable. I'm forever going to pretend this actually happened ("I've sexded!") :)

You have serious talent. This was erotic, but not obnoxious or nauseating and the plot remains the focus.

Wow. That was the first time in my life that I thought that the 'first time in the car' thing was actually a good idea.

-Bandon

Read this on the Livejournal comm and loved it there. I think you really captured his lack of savior faire in the entire thing. He doesn't so much fumble (which I like) as try to figure out exactly what the proper steps are, the moves.

Your fics are quickly becoming favorites of mine -