Its pretty awesome, LOVE the idea! Just remember too check your spelling!

can't wait for the next chapter

Oh nice 6 chapters. I'm interested in reading more.

Like how fastion becomes a rider with what is about to happen she'll need him.

Wonder who the people are who want to talk to Karigan and I love the idea of the sword Adular with him in her hands even fastion may get a shock.

Hope you update soon.

Who are these strange people? I like this story so far cant wait to see what you do with it.

The end of this chapter sounds almost exactly like the scene in Rider's Desire.

I love what you've done with the plot... and i wouldn't mind Fastion slowly growing from a heart brother to a heart... well im sure you know what i mean ;) but seriously, im soo curious about those Rhovan men now! i can't wait for the next chapters

This is good im not sure that is how Fastian would realy act but this is your ff. you should realy continue this is turning out to be very good.

A wonderful read. I love the K&Z moments in addition to Fastian and his induction into the green rider service. Please update soon!

Love the dimensions, it'll be very interesting if you decide to do the Karigan/Fastion relationship (which I fully support). If they end up together, those young riders will gossip like mad!

I'll be beta if you still need one. also YAY a new chapter! I cant wait for more!

When will you be updating? Also Aldur is the name of a demon god known for his fairness and greed. I cant wait to se Fastion's power I would imagine something like quickness would fit him

Liked this.

Awsome! I love the storyline and the way things are going I cant wait for more!

awsome idea I love it but what that about Karigan and Fastion being siblings? could you explain a bit more?

I honestly hope to see Fastion/Karigan in future.