Awww, I like the vows and Michelle saying 'you got it dude' so cute and full of fluff.

Cute!

i liked this i always thought michelle and teddy would make a cute couple and they were really good friends

To wildfirefanatic08, trust me, I'm not messed up in the head thanks :) and I'm not trying to start a fight with you. But, you didn't have to call the author stupid. And you didn't have be so harsh on them. That's all that I am saying. This author might be a beginner, so why not give them a chance? Giving them some pointers is awesome! No doubt! But not a harsh way by saying their writing 'sucked'. I don't want to fight, not at all, but what you said really could've hurt them. :(

Okay, first of all, don't listen to the hater below me. He or she should not say those things In a rude matter. People have the right to be on this site and publish their own stories if they want to. He or she shouldn't talk because if they're so great an author why aren't they a famous author yet? Exactly, so shut up or get the stepping. Anyways, loved the cute story hon! Ignore this hater and the others! I LOVED YOUR STORY!

Oh Boy! Where do I begin?

First off you NEVER put part of a note in the middle of a story! That goes at the top or bottom, in the Author's Note. You should know this.

Second, you need to work on your grammer big time. For instance-
"He's a lucky man." Said Jesse, "He's got a great little munchkin."
- 'Said' in 'Said Jesse' is not supposed to be captalizied. The S is supposed to be lowercase. Get it right.

Third, in all honesty, the writing and everything else sucks, plain and simple. What grade are you in? Eighth?

Learn how to write well and then post because otherwise, like now, you just look stupid, which you probably are.

Get it right or get off the site!

aww i knew it was teddy from the summary! soooo cuteeeee ahhh and good song for first dance :)

beautiful story.

Great story, there is a small problem Michelle didn't know Teddy in pre school they didn't meet until their first day of kindergarten...other that the story is well written.

Great story, there is a small problem Michelle didn't know Teddy in pre school they didn't meet until their first day of kindergarten...other that the story is well written.

the vows wernt really promises like they are supposed to be they were more like storiees

I don't think Teddy had a last name in the show. I looked it up on , and his character is only listed as Teddy. That was good improvising though. I didn't remember his name on smart guy, and I wouldn't've known unless you told me. LOL

This was very good. I love how Teddy and Michelle ended up together, because I always thought they were cute together. And I can seriously see Jesse screaming "Way to go Munchkin" all super loud. This was a great fiction, one of my favorites!

I loved that. If you do end up doing a sequel have it be about either DJ or Stephanie getting married and Michelle is trapped somewhere with Joey and Jesse and she goes into labor.

This was really good!