Wow, and I thought the existing family unit was complicated enough…;-) Though I did not know the other characters they were a nice addition and still allowed for the old dynamics to work. Nice story... I am a sucker for the Ryoko, Ayeka & Tench triple combo. Somehow it works... :-)

AWESOME! I hope you have more Tenchi/Mulit-girl fics! I LOVE the threesom with Tenchi/Aeka/Ryoko because they work so well! POST MORE ASAP! And Nagi being Ryoko's sister is COOL! POST MORE ASAP!

Love ya,

Sam

Hey all, If you've not checked in a few years I'm revising this story.

Thanks for reading this and I hope the revisions make this better!

dennisud (The Author)

D'guh! I hope this isn't your best work. Seriously, as a critic, i... really can't appreciate this. I'd hate to see the first draft! There's a lot to be worked on-i.e. paragraphs, some punctuation, speech, etc. But, like you said, writing's not your #1 profession! Too bad i've never seen Evangelion or i'd read the other fics.

Yeah, The author here! I am adding as an additional page the story, the original good and bad reviews of this story. Please check by tomorrow and it should be up. Just to compare to what has been said now.

dennisud

Noboyuki and Washu? Eh, why not, although I personally feel Washu doesn't have much use for him. Anyway, it was well done.

Well, pretty good if I do say so myself. And I do. I'll try to keep up on your chapters but I've been awfully busy lately...

Not bad for a first fic, even with the revision. I see now where the ideas for Unhibited Consequences came from, and I will be looking forward to the rest of this revision.