Too lazy to log in, but the name I used is my real pen name. AW! I really wish that you would continue this. It could be so cute and interesting. You could do a total B/V spin off. Think about how different things would be if Vegeta and Bulma were aware of Trunks? You would have an extremely fun and unique story! I'd read it! I imagine that Bulma would dump Yamcha almost immediately- which would obviously create tension. Then Vegeta and Bulma would probably have that one night stand they both seem to be considering towards the end of your story. But Vegeta and Bulma probably wouldn't fall in love or get together (permanently) the way they do in most B/V fanfics. It would be a very unique fic if you did write it.

Just a suggestion...

If you don't do it, would you mind me doing a spin off based off of this story? It isn't a for sure thing; meaning, I'm not definitely going to do it. It's just an idea. I completely understand if the answer is no. Even if it is a no, I would LOVE it if you wrote took the idea and ran with it.

Okay...My overactive brain and I are leaving now...

Sincerely,

Breeze

OMFG YOU GOT TO MAKE MORE OF THESE TWO ITS FREAKING AWESOME...XD

You know, if anyone would have figured it out, Vegeta or Bulma were at the top of my list. Vegeta is not stupid, despite his arrogance and pride often getting in the way. Bulma? If she took the time to think on it, I don't doubt she would have figured it out pretty quickly herself, though she tends not to think on things unless they're about to bite her.

Awesome ,it was relly good

m. trunks story are either really good or bad this is a great one,

another great one is A Time Travler's Apotion Crsis

i love it. Update, please!

This was bizarre and awkward and strange.

AND it was funny and interesting and I loved reading it.

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That's a weird combination XD

But really, this is an interesting turn on the events. It's a good story and well worth reading )

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"This guy told us! I think he might be a fan of yours," Bulma explained letting go of all that happened earlier. "He's a mystery man!"

"He knows all about you, daddy!" Gohan yelled glad to see his father again.

"Hm. He is my son from the future," Vegeta explained to the clueless Goku.

"What!" Goku yelled at the top of his lungs. Had he just heard right?

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Vegeta definately has the best line in this story XD I love that.

I have one complaint tough: why did Trunks walk off with Son-Goku this time? He was allready found out, so what's the point?

liked this! u shud def. consider expanding.

Vegeta's sharp and direct and his deductions have certainly changed the playing field. I would love to see how they all cope with the new information. not only must they prepare for the androids, but theres bound to be lots of good tension and a new depth between bulma and vegeta since they have to basically decide wither or not to Allow the future to take its course.

and is gonna stick around for a little bit, cuz the dynamic is different not between him and his father as well. i think you've set up a great story board and hope you'll be updating this.

chow for now:)

nicw twist on this scene :)

It would have made more sense if he figured it out after being told the kid is from the future. At the point he figured out the truth the more likely explanation would have been that Vegeta's brother had a kid or that another Saiyan survived.

Apart from that it's a very nice idea.

Love it! It's great, u realy should add another chapter :)

fun fic - enjoyed having someone figure it out (probably the only reason they didn't was because it is really just too bizarre, but if anyone could, it'd be vegeta :) )

could use a once over in terms of grammar - mostly i noticed some gender switching (like saying "he" to refer to bulma), but still very fun to read

I found this really exciting and quite funny too. I really enjoyed it. Great work.

this is an awesome one-shot. It'd be really cool if you continued it with V/B :)

Wow. I liked that a lot more than I though I would. Well done.

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