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| supersaiyanx 2008-04-15 ch 4,  | abuseOh if only it was a little longer! =P Update soon- great chapter! |
| Dark Goddess of Fiery Tempe... 2008-01-28 ch 4, | abuseI am begging for more of this story, because it's awesome! It's serious, with witty remarks in the right places, and I'm hooked! |
| IAmTheBattleMaiden 2008-01-27 ch 4, | abuseSo I was looking for a VenusxMal fic and found this. I like it, but I certainly hope that wasn't the end. You made it sound like this would be the last chapter. That would be BAD. Anyway, LOVED the Barbie letter. Hilarious. Good luck and update as soon as you can. ^_^ Ja-ne! ^_- |
| moonlitsfantasy 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI hope you'll continue this story soon. It's really good! |
| oztan 2008-01-23 ch 4, | abuseUpdate please! |
| raye85 2007-12-19 ch 4, | abusewow, i wonder whats is happening i am kind of confused for the part who is seaan and what do the memories area going ot affect them. cant wait to read more of it |
| moonlitsfantasy 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseI really like this story and I can't wait for the update! Make it SOON! Also, I thought Serena was the leader, not Mina, but I get the impression in your story Mina is the leader. Am I under the wrong impression or is that how you wrote it? Can't wait to read more! |
| Relyan 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseIt's great to see that you're still working on this story. I was really in to it the first time you posted it, and I am estatic that you're continuting it. I love it! Mina and Mal forever! Merry Christmas! |
| PriestessHelene 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseWow what are you doing in this chapter. Mina kill Mal for goodness sae and get Artemis back. |
| Champion of Justice 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseWay awsome story. please update soon. |
| diamondstar1808 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuselove it, please update asap |
| persian85033 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, can't wait till everybody meets him. |
| Moonlight Petal 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| XyoushaX 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuseMy single ray of light in the darkness known as finals! Thank you so much. (I'll get back to you later about the suggestion I gave in the summer -- right now I'm fighting grad school tests.) Anyway, some constructive comments about the actual fic. I liked your addition of the senshi realizing that Artemis was gone. He's too much of a cutie. There was "inanity" where "insanity" might have been meant -- but "inanity" is actually a word (the quality of being inane, pointless), so I wasn't sure. And I suspect that this Sean is going to be the new (and secure!) plot-twisting villain. Wait, was he there already in the first version? It's been so long since I read the version, even though I'm sure I had done so at least twice. You make Mina so weird, in a good way. Mysterious. She seems to flaunt her sexuality to her friends, but with the emotional restraints you put on her, I have a difficult time seeing her getting it on with any guy. |
| BELLUS NOVUS 2007-12-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell, I liked the dream part. |