|Reviews for 30: Heavy Traffic|
| Silver Bee 1/3/12 . chapter 47
Good to see everyone safe and well and more or less back to normal (which would be constant whinging as far as Alan’s concerned!). Nice that Virgil finally gets some glory – the poor thing was definitely overshadowed by his brothers at the start.
Wise words from John at the end...
Sorry to see this one drawing to a close, you’ve done a fantastic job as always.
| Sam1 12/31/11 . chapter 47
Geez, Alan, can you whine a bit more? Listen to what your brothers are tellin you.
Leave it to John to be the one to just stand there and analyze something. lol At least Gordon had the sense to check, grab, then run out of the fumes with Alan.
Excellent update all the way around, MG! And whilst this past year has been a bit weird for you, you've stood tall with grace and dignity. May 2012 be a much much better year for you and your family...birth and fanfiction.
| Tikatu 12/31/11 . chapter 47
You DID kill him! Happy dance! Dirky-boy was one of your more annoyingly smug and dangerous villians, and I'm glad to see him gone. Good to know that John and Gordon were able save the company's bacon, too!
Yes, Alan, we know you coulda won. There are other days and other races and you're not washed up yet. Scott has a point; you, like your older brothers before you, have to prove yourself ten-fold if you ever hope to escape the very long shadow of your father.
Now for the wrap up and on to the next adventure! Happy New Year MG! May 2012 be the start of something great!
| zeilfanaat 12/31/11 . chapter 47
Yeah, I can understand how it might feel weird to be about to finish this story when your life was so different when you started the story.
In any case though, great chapter once again!
Loved your description of the 'conference': "Just a gathering of the three oldest sons that eventually collected Gordon and Alan like bits of lint on a clothes brush."
So glad they've got that whole experience behind them! Great talk between brothers.
Have a great New Year's Eve!
| thunderbird5 12/31/11 . chapter 47
why won't alan listen? What's going on. Did that guy in the skybox die at last?
| Sam1 12/22/11 . chapter 46
Whew! He seems to have made it but you do have me a bit worried since he's not moved. One person I shouldn't have to worry about causing the Tracys anymore harm seems to have gotten just what he deserved.
Looking forward to your next update and the reactions of John and Gordon.
| Silver Bee 12/22/11 . chapter 46
Poetic justice there for Dirk? Hope so. Doesn’t look too good for Alan, though. Wonderfully dramatic writing as always. (I’m always pleased when you’re on holiday and have more time to write!) Bee
| Tikatu 12/21/11 . chapter 46
DID YOU KILL HIM?
I sooo hope so!
There are still going to be a lot of casualties and questions and pointing fingers. But if Dirky-boy is out of the way ... whew! Here's hoping his true identity gets teased out of his corpse, and the Tracys get a respite from ... well, from everything bad.
Looking forward eagerly for the next installment!
| zeilfanaat 12/21/11 . chapter 46
Great chapter! Sure hope Alan is ok!
| idreamfan24 12/21/11 . chapter 46
Haha, you got what u deserve Dirk Pryce.
But i hope thats not te end of the suffering fir the Tracey family(insert evil laught).
Please update soon
| Tikatu 12/20/11 . chapter 45
Yay! Alan makes it out! Good thing he actually *listened* to John. I'm sure his red race car is in a thousand flaming fragments, and I doubt he got away unscathed. But Dirky boy loses again. And that's what makes it so satisfying.
Looking forward to the next installment.
| thunderbird5 12/20/11 . chapter 45
Good heavens. Poor Alan. Good thing he had John to keep his head on strate.
| Silver Bee 12/20/11 . chapter 45
Another wonderful chapter. Lots of excitement in this one. I can just picture Dirk/Drake watching and eagerly waiting for Alan’s demise. Trust John to hack into the communications – and to be the one to come up with a plan to save his brother. Fantastic writing as always. Looking forward to the reactions of the others, especially Alan and Drake. Bee
| zeilfanaat 12/19/11 . chapter 45
Winning a million times over... yup, can see how escaping certain death can feel like winning a million times over. Hehe. Glad John was there.
Great two chapters! Sorry I haven't been by much lately. Been busy too. Looking forward to the next chapter, and if we don't see you ahead of time: Merry Christmas and a Blessed 2012!
| Sam1 12/6/11 . chapter 44
Dang, the enemies are still coming hard and fast at the Tracys. You just can't help but keep me on edge with this story, can ya?
Looking forward albeit hestitantly to your next update!