OMG LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEED THAT xD

Loved it hot

That was hot! Great job!

Short but sooo sweet! You rock!

dear sweet jesus in heaven a-freaking-men! lol

*gulps* Well that wasn't erotic at all. Nope. And I didn't like it. Not one bit. :) Okay enough sarcasm. That was freaking great! and I loved it even if it was extremely erotic.

I gotta say this fic was bloody awesome! *HIGH FIVES!*

Great, now I'm leering and laughing like a pervert.

It was beautiful. Beautiful. *sniff*

*applauds*

I know, I'm sorry this is so late. So I'll give you a blow by blow of what I thought to make up for it, Ok? *Bows, bows*

Where/when does this take place? Dropped right into the thick of it, I'm a little confused.

XD Brain reboots. I love it. well, after imagining what It would sound like to have him... My name, *Fans self* I can't blame him.

He's just watching and eating popcorn? Darn. Lol. Quick question- How do you snuggle with a bucket of popcorn?

What, do you want me to describe it-? LOL! I would love to see the look on Dean's face if he had.

I'm not fond of the low amount of detail you use to describe it, but I doubt that I could do much better, lol.

*winces* Personally, My version of Dean would have shot gabriel just then. Regardless of the fact that it wouldn't kill him, simply for being there to witness and cause his humiliation.

"Popcorn? It's Hot3!" Ye gods, do I love gabe.

Ooohh... Cas is maaaaaaaaaad...

O.O! Cas's 180 took me be complete surprise. Holy crap.

...Note took me out of the story. you mentioned that it was aseedy bar, you didn't really have to parenthetical the fact that It wasn't the library. Or you could have thrown it into the sentence.

In a poorly lit corner of a seedy bar that was decidedly not the library Sam had promised his brother that's where he would be,

Or several other variations.

Oh yes... Slower... Slower is definitely better.

Yum. Yay again for detail.

It's hard to hear Cas's voice dragging out Dean's name. While it is seductive, A commanding tone, rather than a cajoling one would have been more appropriate.

Cas is a minute-man?

Sam's a voyeur too. xD

Overall, More good than bad. I like it.

Lol...the shirt tearing was funny!

And darn that Gabriel! ROTFL

And again, thank you. Thank you for making this incredibly terrible evening into something better, which is not yet good but similar to it. and i have to tell, it's a big thing that you managed to do that...

This was again, very good. Taking into consideration, that it is known how much you like to write slash x) but i think it was really hot where it had to be, *is still thinking about stripping cas* and funny, *Gaaaaaaaaaabe 3*

so uhm yes, plz write more, i need it. i think we all do :)

Take care,

liz

HALLELUJAAAH!

Cas was epically hot in this! I loved when he cracked his belt like a whip! Nice job, I seriously loved this!

AMEN!

That was seriously hot. I really liked stripping Cas, that just made everything that much more hotter!

I agree, I would so rather watch XD

- Lylix

DAMN! That was good XD! I really like stripping!cas and voyuer!dean. Also cas was so lavicious it was hilarious, I mean come on it did sound like he had been watching one to many pornos lol XD Plus I have to give you props on your creation of the word angelhood (it is so going under my fav words on my profile lol). I was busting up when I read that line! Seriously though I always thought gabe was good for entertainment but this story really takes the cake. I hope you have more m-rated smutty goodness one-shots in store for your readers ;)