A pretty good fanfiction, with only a few mistakes. The only part that I noticed you have missed out, is the part where Hermione and Ron run into Dumbledore (not McGonagall) just as he returns to Hogwarts from his trip to London. -But I can understand if you wanted to make it a bit different from the book.) Otherwise, it was well done. All the characters were portrayed quite well. I liked the use of you're words, although I found some of you're sentences a bit abrupt. Overall, good job.

Aww, this was so, so sweet! I love Ron and Hermione, and I thought it was adorable how Hermione couldn't get the spell to work and got so worked up about it, and then she finally managed. I love how Ron was the calm and collected one for a change, it definitely shows his Gryffindorness. (Oh dear, why can I never write a review without making up words?) I thought everyone was very in character, I liked the glimpses of McGonagall and Madam Pomfrey, and my favourite line had to be "Ron swore- something Hermione would not have permitted in other circumstances..." haha it made me giggle.

It was really well written, too, so good job! :)

This was a nice idea and you made it very, very believable. I think your characterisation of Ron, Hermione, McGonagall and Dumbledore was perfect and it was almost like reading something that JK Rowling wrote herself. So well done.

Your description was great and I couldn't see any spelling/grammatical errors. I really liked it. I love missing moments :D Especially Ron/Hermione ones.

This is such a great scene to write! I really liked how Hermione was nervous and unsure of herself and Ron had to comfort her. I think in stressful situations she gets like that and she's not as confident as you normally think she is. It's really great characterization. And I love how they argue over going to the hospital wing. And I like how unsettled she was by Dumbledore's reaction as well. This is really well done and I thoroughly enjoyed your interpretation of what could have happened. good job!

That was adorable :)

Aww..def the beginning stages of their like for each other :) ...this was a very interesting version of things.

Very nice friendship moment and very well written :D