| Reviews for The Joys Of Being Grounded |
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RIS 11/27/12 . chapter 1 We use sofa and couch too! Great story! |
HermioneGranger12468 9/6/12 . chapter 1Please Write More I Love It! |
Guest 7/6/12 . chapter 1 I love it |
myjumpingsocks 4/14/12 . chapter 1So cute! I found this to be quite sweet, and in character. Loved this line in particular: "I meant to ask you earlier, can you give me directions to Stef's house? I wanna go throw things at her window." |
Jaycee Payne Ward 2/26/12 . chapter 1itwasgood:) |
CaptainMeghanSparrow 1/17/12 . chapter 1AWESOME! AMAZING! OUTSTANDING! I loveeee this! it's one of the best Mouth/Stef fabrics I've read! are you going to continue it? please please pleasssseee say you will! :D |
TheKoganKid 11/25/11 . chapter 1Ahh this was so fantasticly cute! I was SO upset when these two didn't kiss in The Goonies, but as long as their's a fanfiction about it, I think I'll live. ;) |
Nightcrawlerlover 10/17/11 . chapter 1Neat! Very awesome job writing this as well. :) I like it - especially this part: The next morning, Andy gingerly made her way up the garden path to Brand's house. She carefully stepped over the broken screen door, and tapped on the glass. "Hey, Andy!" Mickey grinned as he let her inside. "Hey Mickey, how're you doing?" The brunette replied as she followed him. Before he got the chance to answer, Mouth had let himself in and sat down in the armchair. "Hey, Andy! No Stef? I thought she was attached to your hip." Mouth smirked. "She's grounded," Andy sighed. "Her parents are a bit old fashioned." "Oh." Mouth was uncharacteristically silent as he pulled his comb from the pocket of his jeans and ran it through his hair. Very cool and brilliant! :) Keep up your super-neat, very extraordinary and phenomenally creative writing! :) |
bloodredcherry 9/30/11 . chapter 1I thought it was cute. Mouth allowing Stef to call him Clark was a nice touch. |
Ari 7/31/11 . chapter 1 You wrote plait instead of braid/ ponytail, I'm not sure which, but I immediately thought oh she's british! It made me smile :) |
Idon'treallyusethissitesoyeah 7/7/11 . chapter 1Thank goodness I'm not the only one who thought this couple was super cute! I just watched the movie and I couldn't stop thinking about what an amazing couple they would make. They're both so funny and clever, they're a perfect pair. |
Ted Theodore Logan 6/30/11 . chapter 1This story was really great. When you mention that your english in the end I just want to say that if you put Sofa anywhere most Americans would ignore that. Alot of us say Sofa instead of Couch. We actully say both. Just wanted to mention that. I really liked the story. The actor who play Mouth (Clark) is one of my favorite actors but mainly because of the movie The Lost Boys. Just so that you know, you spelled Mikey wrong. There is no 'C' in his name. |
Rosie Thornet 6/12/11 . chapter 1Cute as fuck. :P You should make a sequel :D Aww I saw the couple and then I was like more more |
MySpecialDream 6/11/11 . chapter 1How cute! I love it, very much! |
NYMPHADORA.LOVE 5/30/11 . chapter 1Very great story! I love Stef and Mouth! They are really quite a good couple. May I put in a request for a story about Stef's parents reaction to her dating Mouth? It could be a good story and I like the way you portray her parents and Stef and Clark as a couple:) very well written loved it! |