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Nyla Stilez 1/2/12 . chapter 1
Great Story. I loved the ending!:)
Joanna Davis 8/1/11 . chapter 1
Here is a couple I haven't seen for a while, and personally I don't think they match. Still, the characters were nicely portrayed and I guess it's very realistic too.

I liked it, so just positive thoughts from me.
Queen Latifeh 6/13/11 . chapter 1
sooo.. does that mean she's not preggo? P
Glitterthorn 6/7/11 . chapter 1
I know about the ultrasound pictures- my parents are OBGYNs and I cannot tell which blob is the baby on the picture. it's ridiculous. :)
RPDmember 5/12/11 . chapter 1
Yea...that was awesome.
ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36 5/11/11 . chapter 1
too cute
cloak of red clouds offline 5/10/11 . chapter 1
There's a typo it says we re going to be parents great story glad to know someone's writing
heartsXkisses 5/10/11 . chapter 1
This was just soooooo adorable, brilliantly written, and the best yet! Please write another soon. As for the rating I give it...two thumbs up, times a million, yaaaay! b(.)d
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