way to fight for her Rick...keep pushing!

Oh how I wish this was actually what happened :/ Beautiful :)

Awwww, I wish they shared another passionate kiss after that fight and the last words were not 'get out'!this was great!

Don't I wish! Terrific read

I wish! But I doubt it :(

WOW what an emotionally charged dialog! I love it! Thanks for writing this story!

I wish... but now that I've seen a sneak preview of this scene, I know it's going to go differently. I'm still wishing for a kiss, though, or at least a proclamation of love. sigh This show is going to KILL me.

WOW I just say preview for castle on you tube and it looks like a pretty good show comming up here on monday. And with your little spin on it this was pretty darn good. I like the way you put a lot of though in to how things might go.

Keep up the writing :-D

Steve

i can totally see this happening! like absolutely totally! apart from the kiss in the end :) fantastic story!

lip shaking...eyes going blurry...WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Love NCISchick xoxooxox

Very good. Im so excited at the upcoming finale but I also don't want it to be here because then I know we will all have to wait til next fall for more! Its so stressful...and it isn't even real. Great work and keep up the amazing stories!

oh that so good ! i can totally see that happen! 6 more day and we will found out!

Beautiful! If only! I think castle gets shot instead of Kate.

I hope the scene goes something like this. This has great dialogue in it, by the way.

Wow, as ever with your fic it was truly an excellent piece of writing, your characters and their voices are literally pitch perfect and as for your scenario I can see this playing out exactly like that on the show itself. That's how amazingly well you write Castle fic. I'm not reading a fic so much as watching snippets of episodes.

Thank you.

Ps - if it does play out like this? Once I've got done with the squee and flailing, I'm crowning you officially Queen of The Castle.