they aren't exactly professionals, walking down an open street, when did that become a good idea, also, a week of training, they should have at minimum 13 weeks,

wtf did happen?

This is already an awesome story, especially because I love war and wolves. Keep it up.

This is just like Halo, with the taking people against there will and making them super soldiers, hence the Master Chief! They should get some really cool armor or something!

Okay I really think that you can't steal the plot of Modern Warfare 2 and call it a story . This should be a crossover and you should'nt keep stealing or if you ABSOLUTELY need to say at least that you took the plot from MW2 in your author notes. If you keep stealing the story really isn't yours , is it ?

i have some more heeeerrreeeee we go!blondie is 5'5 100 is very good at sneak attacks and hand to hand combat ryder also like to put his knife on his ryder blondie is good at snake attacks and hand to hand and blonde both have brown more tell me good job with the story

Why dsoe humphrey hate everybody

Good job.i forgot to tell you that they were in the rangers if this is before before mw2 they are in the rangers.I love this story so much you are just doing an amazing job on this story. i will think more about their info I'll probly give it to ya in the next review.

Ha I like MW2 style, is a beast.

if you have the tf 141 come at one point can you add 2 of my characters one is isaiah "ryder" cameron and payton "blondie" are married ryder is mixed blondie is white ryder is 5'9 171 lbs. his favrote gun is the m16 grenade is 5'5 100 lbs. she is brutal in combate and when mad look out. ryder is a fast and agile guy he is a lt. and very close with mactavish and is a q's about my characters just ask when you BTW awsome story so far.

I really doubt the military gives liquor as a beverage.

quit the mw2 stuff and spell ''graved ''right

They go to either Tikrit or Baghdad and Lilly gets shot.

Keep up the good work and please update!

garth shoots himself in the face after over doseing on heroin

someome's pissed...