i love it. i love fics that have songs in them. some people say that stories that can't stand without the songs are trash, but they really aren't. they're harder, finding the right song that fits the mood that you're oing for, and if one little detail is wrong, how are oyu gooing to cover it?
this was done really well, and i love it

Hey Kristi it was long but I liked it. I think I've heard you sing it before though. Have a fun summer. Love Carol.