There's something incredibly wrong with me, I shouldn't have giggled at the Doctor and Donna doing a 'head count.' Poor Jack.

Alright, so i like 9, so I can totally dig having him and 10 at the same time, but it still makes me twitchy that they're not 'twins' anymore, sigh.

Okay...the Face of Boe? Wait? What?

I appreciate the fact that Rose isn't a MarySue-ish character despite coming off as ridiculously powerful, this works mostly because she's absolutely terrifying. Good on you.

I'm glad (some version of) the Rani & the Master survived, the Master especially.

Do you update multiple chapters at a time or something? Because the last few times I've checked this story it's been like: one week-nothing, one week later-I'm behind. It's rather disconcerting.

this has confused me just as much as when the metacrisis happened. which one is jack? What's the difference? WHAT"S GOING ONNNNNNNN!

On a side note, the tardises should have tardis babies. I don't know how that would work, but it would be adorable, i'm pretty sure! :D

i loved it! I'm so glad that Jack is okay...what was he lying about, exactly?

?

OOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

GOTCHA. So his mind is stuck in his previous head...?

Maybe?

His possibly time-lord head?

:/

you do such angsty things to your characters. but it always turns out awesome so I trust you. and thanks for the view on the video! Now i'm even more excited!

Jack, Face of Boe, already? Ok, so now I'm curious.

It's exciting even if you've dealt with (for now?) the Master and Rani. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I loved this! I'm glad that Jack's made some progress...it's so cute that Jenny helped him regrow. And whatever Romana did...I loved it!

You had John regenerate, damn you i was hoping for more twin on twin action seeing as its only been a year. oh well stories move on

Just a simple thing to say, brilliant, as always. Poor Jenny.

"He'll be back." Then her voice split and changed. "I made sure of that."

i love that line so much. great chapter

HIS MOM IS ALIVEEEEEE XDDDD yessssss.

and so I'm really happy that the "master" and the "Rani" are living happily (sort of) ever after together because my heart kind of went KABOOM when the master and rani originally died and that was the horribly sad part for me, soooo yeah.

love this chap :D

this was awesome! Ianto and Tish! Now that would be very cute. And the doppelgangers escaped...the question is, are they still evil?

I would have paid to see this happen in the show. One big retcon pill...

... or the old "It was all a bad dream/hallunication" trick you always see over used.

oh dammit Jack, always have to be the center of attention don't you? lol though it's nice to see ( again :-)

now that all hell's broken loose, on to the next chapter!