Ahh, unrequited love... Beautiful.

Yoruichi annoying Byakuya, still as amusing as ever.

I really love this pair :)

It's got this kind of..authentic but hard to connect relationship.

Your words and descriptions really makes the story click and I applaud you of that.

Good luck with further writing, I will be waiting for more.

Ahh me likeie want more plez.

I like it, it shows exactly how much the two of them (or just Byakuya) have changed.

Wow.

I love anticlimax, when used effectively. The characters seemed real, and rounded, and true to form. The setting was good, and the small nods to the canon were both appreciated and helpful. Although, the only problem I had was that, if it has been six years since the end of the Winter War, how old are the "children"? Apart from that,

Wow.

-wiggles with glee- Again! Augh, you write this pair so well. I loved it.

Gosh! I hate it when my favorite pairings don't just get together in the anime. Or the fanfics! )..Nice job though!This was still the best!

I enjoyed reading your short story. I really like and enjoy this pairing. So I felt it would be wrong to just read this story and move on so I would like to convey my gratitude for writing such a good piece. Hope you continue to write other fanfics with this pairings. THANK YOU!

Fantastic.

I love the image this gave me.

I really liked it you should definitely write more chapters especially more between yoruichi and byakuya!