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Bri 1/4/03 . chapter 6
This story lacked a lot.

-bad spelling

-awful story plot

-made NO sense at all, whatsoever

You don't need another chapter and I prefer you not.
D. T. Dey 6/6/02 . chapter 6
More chapters, please. I'm missing the tale. When's "The Great Cornholio: Part 2" coming?
Thomas 4/17/02 . chapter 4
I see a lot of potential here, much of the dialogue is genuinely funny, a rare sight these days. What you're missing is some experience. So keep writing.

No Cassandra and Daria weren't frinds on B&B. But then again there was no episode with them arguing either.

Daria was a freshman at Highland, so she couldn't run into Quinn there. There was an episode where B&B got set back to the 8 grade, so you *can* let Quinn have a flashback with them.

Quinn attacking B&B? That does seem a bit OOC. I can see Tom attacking them though.
Rodger 4/14/02 . chapter 1
On the contrary, Unknown, i thought this story was very good. For a person who has never seen Beavis and Butthead that much, Dariafan13 has really got there character down good, i remember watching that show but i don't remember who Cassandra was so i'm not sure if her and Daria where friends. Good job, Dariafan13. add more chapters though! I'm looking foward to it! and if we are going with favorite lines heres mine:

Cassandra- Thanks a lot.. I owe ya

Daria- how about a human shield?

Cassandra- wha?

Daria- look.

(Beavis and Butthead come in)

Beavis- heh heh heh FIRE! FIRE! heh heh heh

Butthead- shut up dillhole huh huh huh huh

Daria- what are you morons talking about?

Butthead- huh huh huh Diarrhea.

Both- Diarrhea cha cha cha cha!

Daria- oh, god.

Cassandra- kill them.. please kill them

Daria- human shield?

Cassandra- bite me

cool..
Unknown 4/13/02 . chapter 1
i don't think i've ever seen a more fitting title...this IS crap. get a beta reader, a spell checker, or at least pay attention in english class when the teacher talks about punctuation...
Jr 4/8/02 . chapter 4
hey, that was cool! as for Cassandra i don't really know who she is either sorry. i liked thid dtory the best out of all your stories your a good writer you just need some spell check! (just kidding i know you hate people telling you that lol!) I love Daria/ BB crossovers and yours rocked? this is my favorite part

Daria- why are you here?

Butthead- uh..

Daria- to annoy me?

Butthead- yeah

Daria- then you've done your job

butthead- she said job! blow job!

Real funny and Daria's reaction to seeing Beavis amd Butthead? Puke of course! perfect. add more chapters! you rock lol!
slincoln 4/7/02 . chapter 4
Not bad, but spell-check, spell-check, spell-check. That and I don't think Daria would ever say "Dude," as a form of greeting...keep it up.

-sam
Dariafan 4/6/02 . chapter 1
ok this is going to sound dumb. but Cassandra was Daria's friend on B&B right? the show came out when i was just a baby, like 5 years old.. i don't really remeber who she was on the show.. can anyone give me some e-mail as if to Daria had any friends on the show. thanks!

-Kristy
D. T. Dey 4/5/02 . chapter 3
A conversation between Daria and Cassandra, huh? Well, you beat me to it fair and square. Gotta give you some credit for that Dariafan13.
Suprgrl 4/2/02 . chapter 3
thats really funny! i love the flashbacks hope you add more! Thats funny how Quinn beat up B&B that was kind of unexpected but cool. Add more flashbacks though
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