This is fanmade right? Not part of the actual story?

Great story. I just read through the entire thing and was so engrossed in reading that I didn't look for any mistakes. The only mistake that I spotted was here 'It wasn't long when their little break was almost over when Sion had suddenly fallen asleep.' Not really a mistake, but, its just a bit unfitting, you know, using 'when' twice in a sentence.

I love happy endings...Can the mad hero really go back to normal? I wish this really happened in the anime..

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

that was good u should make more

This is good, although you kept switching Sion's spelling for his name from Sion to Shion. That was a little confusing - But I liked the rest! Lol, I could see Iris liking Sion that way, but the other way around is harder. However, I do agree that he needs to be paired with someone.

I really enjoyed this. It was a wonderful oneshot! :D

Awesome story! One of the best fanfics for DenYuuDen that I've read so far! (Which is quite few XD) LOL, there were some parts that really made me laugh and KYAA the Ryner/Ferris moments! Anyways, I hope that there'll be more DenYuuDen fanfics in the future! I'll try writing one myself! AWESOME GREAT EPIC story once again :D!

I really liked it. Here's hoping that this starts a trend of more Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu fanfiction!

Great story! It really made me laugh at some points, Sion Special makes them go to sleep! haha! Really funny and entertaining.

Hee, this was really cute. If the ending is a happy one that everyone survives (which hopefully it will be), I can definitely see Ryner and Ferris going off and doing something like this. The "Lieral Toxic Poison Special" made me laugh, too.