 VampireYumi 9/18/09 . chapter 9Woah... I love this story o.O
End... End? END? Like, THE end? *panicking*
No *sniff*
I liked it so much... I want to read more... *hides somewhere*
*sobs* *takes a deep breath*
Okay, now to the other stuff.
I like your style of writing, really. Though, it confused me a bit... I mean... The changing scenes and stuff. I sat there and thought "Huh? What the...?" because it hit me in the back and I had to think about it to get that it was actually a different scene now... Uh... Yeah...
Hm... That was about everything I wanted to say...
Bye!
Yumi |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/20/08 . chapter 9Phew, I thought Subby was going to kill Kamui ;
this was really good, and I liked it a lot! Best wishes fgor future stories, and please bring mopre of this wonderful quality to us.
Good luck,. and keep it up!
Tsubasa |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/20/08 . chapter 8the start of this chapter was so funny! It was so beautiful at teh end as well.
Keep it up! |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/20/08 . chapter 7If Subaru saves the souls in the sakura... and sees them... will he meet Hokuto-chan and Sei-chan again?
Keep it up! |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 6Kamui, if he's the Subby I know, he still doesn't know how to reach his heart. MAybe that changed after he realised he _ Sei-chan...
And I'm just curious, have you read TYokyo Babylon? It's a little hard to tell. You know a lot about Subaru, but you have made him very... different to what he was then. *Sigh* He is very different t what he was then... |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 5This chapter has stunned me to the core.
Keep it up! (Pay no attention to the comment above) |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 4Yes, Kamui watches too much tv.
I can see where this is going. But I don't want too! And it was so amazing how amui learned about Subby. And I doubt that Subby would do what Sei-chan did yto him to another person. I mean, gettiong stars engraved in your hands must hurt a lot. I mean, Subby passed out!
Keep it up! |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 3okay, this chapter was even more interesting. But I think that you locked in the italics too early. Or was that meant to happen?
Keep it up! |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 2Interesting. Very interesting. I like it, I like it a lot! |
 TsubasaSyaoforever 12/19/08 . chapter 1EH? What are you talking about, Kamui? O.O
anyway, this is a good start. |
 DerangedandLovinIt 8/2/06 . chapter 9...
*weeps* |
 anonnymusevil 5/13/05 . chapter 9 I loved this!very very much! |
 JOSEPH JOESTAR 1/4/05 . chapter 1Your story made me want to reread 'The Dead Zone'! AH! But that's good, because it's one of my favorite books. GREAT story. |
 golden-flame4 5/25/04 . chapter 9woo... nice.. like the best subaru/kamui fic i've read... lol... very well written :D i like _ |
 Konnie-chan 9/10/03 . chapter 9This was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
What else can I say but thank you? |