so this story here doesnt really have a real episode?

DEAR SUSAN ZELL: FIRST I;D LIKE SAY HOW MUCH I LOVED READING (MONSOON)AND ALL THE STORIES YOU WROTE.I ENJOYED READING THEM ALL. BUT IT WAS THE MARGUERITE AND ROXTON:S ROMANCE THAT KEEP ME GLUED TO YOUR I;AM LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 2 WHICH WELL BRING M/R MORE TOGEATHER AND BRING A BABY INTO ROXTON;S AND MARGUERITE LIFE. ANN

Wow. I don't know what to say. Wow. So beautiful...and hot! :)

That was a REALLY GOOD story. it was really sweet. Keep writing Marg Rox. :)

Using words like "wonderful" and "incredible" just don't seem like enough. The perfect way you displayed Rpxton and Marguerite's tension and frustration and the ultimate pay-off were picture perfect. These two will always have a fierce and passionate relationship - and they are so much in love. Well, well done, dear Susan.

Susan I liked it so much I must have read it at least 10x and each time it left me breathless.

Sherri

Oh wow... wow, wow, wow. I can quite honestly say that this is the best Marguerite/Roxton story I have ever read. I believe that no one has ever captured their love as perfect as this, and I can think of nothing better to bring them together then a raging thunder storm. Us M/Rers can only DREAM that something like this would happen on LW!

-Brandy

(Who is running off to take a nice cool shower!)

very good story. very descriptive. i liked it alot

Well Susan, you already know how I feel about this story, but figure an author can't possibly get enough attaboys. I absolutely love it. You provided us with a passionate, fiery and incredibly romantic treat. Hopefully TPTB are taking some notes...

Good stuff! Very, very good! :o)

Wonderful Susan! I liked all your stories, but this one is really special. Everything just screamed UST (unresolved sexual tension) and you did a great job with M&R, especially that last scene :D !

Oh my! Is the heat on? It's HOT in here! ;)

VERY nicely done!

Susan! This story was superb. I love it so much. It took me about an hour to finish reading, I kept stopping every now and then just to remember to breathe. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more of your fabulous stories.

(reviewing as I read - currently halfway done)

AHH! Susan! You are an UTTER GENIUS! This is brilliant!

First of all, it's HYSTERICAL! I've been cracking up on and off ever since I started reading...

And that argument M started so she could be alone with R...that was really good! I actually had a practically identical idea a few days ago - yup, I had this whole idea for a story called 'Ploys,' in which M and R would constantly start loud, raucous arguments so that they could stomp out of the room a few minutes later and be alone together...first they would yell and shove at each other, and everyone else would be like 'Roxton! Get control of yourself! M, are you ok?' and they wouldn't see that M and R were actually holding hands where only a moment ago, R had grabbed her wrist roughly... *sigh* But you posted first...so I guess that's that... :(

Still - this story is sooooooo much fun! You can practically slice the tension with a mere fingernail...it's incredible how you do this! Such talent...

I love how everybody's being so clueless...Malone especially, LOL! And Challenger too...they always blame Marguerite...so funny! Heehee! (it's 2:31 am right now; perhaps that explains why I'm so giddy...)

Oooohhh...a funny Challenger moment! These are often so rare in fanfic that they're always a pleasure. "“Yes, well, I’ve heard that promise before,” Challenger snorted. Hardly anyone popped down to visit him in his laboratory. For the life of him, he couldn’t figure out why." LOL he's just so clueless...

(just finished it)

*sob* Oh that was so beautiful it actually moved me to 'teariness'...oh wow. You have a wondrous talent for capturing these characters, and you write scenes of passion so eloquently and beautifully that I...don't even know what to say anymore. Oh wow wow wow...BRAVO!

lol, brilliant. Just brilliant. Their frustration had me in giggles, and I don't giggle. Beautiful ending. Just.. perfect.

Dai stihó

CrimsonCat