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| slash hater 2005-07-28 ch 19, anon. | abuseI don't like slash either. Romance should be between a man and a woman. I'm glad this story has no slash. |
| wonderful elf 2005-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am a wonderful elf. |
| Nevaeh Elenath 2003-12-29 ch 25, anon. | abuseWOW!! YES YES WRITE A SEQUAL! I've always enjoyed your writing! I guess I'm kinda evil 'cause I enjoy angst! well Keep Writing! |
| wanequelle 2003-10-26 ch 25,  | abuseOh wow! That was really good! Throughout the whole thing I was like "Is there going to be any angst in it?" but there was and I am content. It was very sweet but I'm wondering what happened to the Fire Serpent. You have a real talent for writing and the personalities of Daisy,Emaretta, Milo, etc. are very well thought out. It was a pleasure to read! ~Laura |
| Arwen Baggins 2003-10-09 ch 8, | abuseThis story is soo good. I love the way you have Frodo, Sam, and Merry going off on an adventure together. How Sam's protective of both and them. I also liked the segment with little Daisy. I'm sure I'll be seeing more of her and obviously Pippin and Lotho. You can't continue the story without them. Also, I share your beliefs regarding the slash since I too am a Christian. I will never write and never intentionally read slash. I have read part of two slash stories. One before I knew what 'slash' meant and one that was not labelled as such in the summary, I happened to skip that part in the chapter one author's note. Anyway, since you are a Christian (among other reasons, I will certainly be reading more of your stories). And I will ask that you read on of mine too, well not the story really, but the chapter six author not at the end of my Frodo and Pippin story. I have posted a prayer request there that is close to my heart and I hope you'll take the time to R+P - "Read and Pray"! Thank you and God Bless. |
| hmsgirl 2003-03-24 ch 7, | abuseThis is a cute story! I loved how you misspelled words in Pippin's letter. That makes it much more believable! |
| Tippy 2003-02-13 ch 25, anon. | abuseHi! I absolutly love the works youve done! You're an awesome writer! I was wondering if there was any way i could talk to you about a fanfiction i would like to write? If you want to, please email me at GodslilTippy@aol.com Thanks bunches! |
| Obelia medusa 2003-01-13 ch 25, | abuseI finished the story, and it was great! I can't wait to read the sequel! You've given me some new ideas for the story I'm working on; unfortunately, since I spent the day reading your story, I won't get to work on mine until tomorrow! Oh well, it was definitely worth it. :) |
| Obelia medusa 2003-01-13 ch 22, | abuse'“You were their pride and joy,” Bilbo continued. “Their greatest treasure.” His eyes watered with pride of his own as he looked at his nephew and heir. “As you are mine, now.”' Beautiful! My only complaint is, I wanted to find out what Bilbo said to Lotho and his cronies! |
| Obelia medusa 2003-01-13 ch 18, | abuseYay! I was going to wait until the end of the story to review, but I just had to review now. I love this story! I think you've done a marvellous job with the characters, especially Frodo and Merry. I'm thrilled to see those troublesome S.-B.'s getting back into action; Lotho makes such a great bully! OK, now I'm going to read some more... |
| emmchen 2002-12-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really love this fan fiction. It is obvious you put a lot of work into it, and the result is wonderful. Thank you! |
| katakanadian 2002-12-21 ch 7, | abuse'Merry looked up, his cheeks distended with pie so that he looked a squirrel with acorns in its cheek pouches.' Wonderful imagery. One tiny criticism: please remember to start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. |
| katakanadian 2002-12-21 ch 4, | abuseReally sweet so far. I like how you have worked in a couple of movie lines. It is often overdone in others fics but you have shown restrained homage. |
| A Elbereth 2002-11-02 ch 3, | abuseOh look! Frodo is singing about me in chapter 3! -_^ |
| tiggivon 2002-10-07 ch 25, | abuseloved the story and of course you did the sequel which i am enjoying and can now appreciate what you wrote here. tiggivon.x |