And THAT'S why I love him...
Keep up the good work ;)

Simply awesome. So dark. So emotional, in its own way. :/ So cool xD

That was... dark... to say the least... well... it was really good though! I enjoyed it! Are you going to make more?

That was beautiful in a twisted way...I loved it!

Great! Only, Viktor is Slovakian...

OH HELL YES. This was awesome! love that you are not afraid to delve into the darkness. Loved it.

Well that was certainly dark... should've known by the angst tag. But I actually really liked this despite all the depressing parts. I think you kept everyone pretty much in character, almost no spelling/grammar issues, and you were really able to capture the emotion, particularly in the motel scene. I would've loved for it to be a bit longer, and maybe with some more Victor-Pepper Father-Daughter type stuff, he probably would've been a little more insistent on getting an answer after she got out of a car with his ex-partner. I recently got into lackadaisy myself and was disappointed with the small number of fanfics, so good job for being one of the few to actually publish. Overall it was a good story, definitely worth the read.

P.S This is the first time I've ever got to be the first reviewer WOOT!