Aw... It's so sad... (Do I say that alot?) But it's really kawaii, too! _

cute. please write more!

Very well-done. If all the other vignettes are this well-written, then I might as well not have submitted mine :)

I have to agree with what you said about Aoshi saying that he's home, but other than that, I thought that it was extremely well-written. Very touching, and the language that you use is enough to transport us to that moment when our boys come home. Thank you for a beautiful and moving piece.