That was perfect and beautiful!

Thanks,

Mercedes

Just had the chance to read through this whole story. I'm new to the series (just finished Season 2) and I LOVE this story! Can't wait to read more!

We obviously think it is awesome and are bouncing on our tippy tippy toes waiting for more!

I really love this story. Is this all there is, or are you plannig on writing more?

You're rocking this story! Looking forward to more.

i am loving this story so much! cannot wait for the next update!

I just wanted to tell you that I "devoured" all 9 chapters of this story. I can't even say "read" because that doesn't adequately explain how I enjoyed it. The story was really well written, and it made a lot of sense for Parker and Elliot to be so attracted to each. I don't know if this is the end of your story, but if not, please write more!

Well, apparently my name has changed from kta to k8a; not sure how that happened ...whatever... Under either name, I am really loving this story; it just keeps getting better.

I love their awkwardness and uncertainty about how to actually *conduct* this relationship, but the absolute certainty of each that each of them wants to. It's sweet and delightful. Parker is occasionally treading the limit of "I had a horrible childhood and never grew up right", but I don't think you've taken her over it, and I've known real people who were much more affected by that phenomenon, so I think it's all good. In any case, I like how you're handling her, but be careful she doesn't slip out of your control.

I figure you should be able to turn out another chapter by midnight, Friday, right? :-)

Oh, and can Eliot deliver my chocolate chip cookies, please ;-) Or Chris, I'm prepared to compromise.

You're doing great.

love this even more can't wait for u to post more 3

Someday soon should probably be tomorrow if its possible lol

Ok, it took a long time to get there, but you got there. Keeping it clean and chaste is a drag, but that could just be my hormones. I like the fact that they got together, but I needed less description of their anxieties. Would love to continue reading more from you . Your characters are good. The only thing I would alter is that Parker is way too childlike.

Thanks,

Mercedes

Please keep it rated T. And write more lol

You are such a tease!

Hurry, hurry, and thanks.

Mercedes

i love love this so far, great grammar n well organized.

Interesting! I can't wait for more!