| Reviews for Vinnie's Randomness |
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cassy1994 3/25/12 . chapter 1love the stating the obvious |
Catzkittenz 9/12/11 . chapter 1 Cute.. I LOVE Doogie and Vinny! |
The Madman From The Bronx 6/7/11 . chapter 1Hey! I see that you haven't gotten any reviews for this. While I like the characterization of Doogie and Vinnie (especially Vinnie) here, the story itself doesn't have much material or purpose. After reading it, I didn't gain much insight into the characters or story. Perhaps you could lengthen it a bit? Also, in the grammatical realm, you're missing a couple of punctuation marks. Nice job overall, though! Cheers, Madman |