|Reviews for I loved her first|
| OrbEater 9/21/11 . chapter 1
This story, however short, was amazing. It's so sweet and pure, and I actually saw the same possible pairing when I first watched the movie. If not for all that happened, I can see them having become a couple. "I know you always wanted off the road." He looked so sad when he said that line. If Helena hadn't been so wrapped up in her own thoughts she might have noticed.
Amazing peice for an amazing movie. Thank you so much for sharing with us 3
| The Anti-BusinessMan 6/8/11 . chapter 1
Haha I like the variety
| BatteredandBloodied 5/30/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed that! It was quite different from others I've read (I read a ton of Helena/Valentine, I just love the pairing..) but it was well written. I liked how we got a sense of Pingo's background, even though he's a minor character in the movie. Thanks for mixing up the selections a bit. ;)