wow. i agree with you on the dark thing. but still, i love it! the last line was amazing!

Oh, that was so good!

It was dark but not over the top

very nice D

(Eyes wide.) Whoa...darkness. I loved it!

Ooh, Hannah, your stories are marvelous! In Kristen-speak its... ULTRA SPIFFAH!

Hm, did you ever think of writing an original novel? I'm sure that'd be ultra spiffah too. If you do, keep me in mind- I'd be one of your first buyers! .

This is glorious! (By the way, Stephen Schwartz.) It's a damn pity nobody can find Baz's email address, or I'd suggest you send this and implore him to make a special edition the way George Lucas did to the first three 'Star Wars' movies, y'know, go in an' change an' add a lot of stuff. Lovely, perfectly Duke-ish fic!

-Jan McN.

Eeeeeeeek... very good. Verrrrrrrrrrry good. I could totally see that happening! It was so similiar to, and yet so different from, that infamous scene in 'HoND'. Loved the slight twisting of the words, particularly 'Now, Diamond, it's your turn' and 'Choose me or your writer'. Very good. Bravo! Excellently done.

Wow, this is wonderful! I LOVE dark stories, in fact I ADORE dark stories. There aren't nearly enough Duke fics out there. Congratulations on such a great fic. )

That was great. I like how you adapted that song to fit the Duke.

"Be mine or you will burn!" Cuh-reepy. Dearest Duke is just the slightest bit disturbed, no? YOU DON'T LOVE ME SO YOU SHALL BURN! MWAHAHAHA! Well, something like that.

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Sinister.

*mouth hangs open in shock* bloody brilliant!

Damn, girl, that was creepy. Very well written, really cool analogy. Love the Duke's twisted logic, and the song fit perfectly. Good job:)

Wow... this was a very dark and powerful piece, Hannah. Excellently done. You pulled it off perfectly, the Duke's anger, his sense of being better than everyone... Wow.

*shivers* Oo.. Very dark, Banana. But extremely well written. You captured the Duke's feelings and thoughts extremely well. Keep writin'! Or else! *MUAHAHA* ;) Twixxie

Yep...that was a little dark...but still excellent...

*exhales*

Good Lord, Hannah. That was INTENSE.