PLEASE GO ON! PLEASE! IT SOUNDS LIKE A GR8 STORY I NEED YOU TO GO ON!

I like your idea. I think the chapters need to be flushed out a bit more. Ideas: what kind of interaction will venus have with buttercup? How does she fall for inigo? What challenge will she face with wesley? What is her background and how will it interfere with the story? Did Humperdink have a part to play or is he not involved with her past? Just some odeas. Hope they help and you post soon.

Please continue this story. I really want to see where it leads :)

I like your characterization of Fezzik- no, I LOVE it. It is EPIC.

However, I suggest finding someone to help you with the grammar and spelling.

Ciao!