|Reviews for My Love, My Secret|
| Sir Stud Muffin 7/2/12 . chapter 35
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 35
| Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 25
omg, the last part of that chapter waqs pure genious! when Lorenzo kissied her, i was screaming in my chair, i soo not expecting that. but when i thought it couldnt get better, BAM! Merlins there watching her. My heart stoped beating for that moment, i blanked out, with all emotionsand questions, i just "stoped right there" and said said "bless your wounderful brain".
PS: u saw what i did there with the title
| FringifiedWhovian 6/28/12 . chapter 35
Oh My Gosh. I have been reading this story off and on for about three days, and I'm deeply saddened to have reached the temporary ending. Please, please hurry with the update.
This story is phenomenal, despite the occaisional typos and phrasing errors. I couldn't easily stop for breaks once I picked it up. I especially love the nods at the plot to the actual show, such as Merlin wishing he could magically fix things and Morgana insisting that she isn't a witch. And OMG the knight/damsel analogies! Gaius's entry to the story was terribly exciting and if Lancelot/Lorenzo comes back into play before the marriage like in the show I may have to kill him/you/whoever happens to be nearby at the time.
This is amazing and I can only commend you on your dedication to this tale and boundless imagination to what I can only imagine must be a severe effort. As a fellow teen writer, I certainly struggle with updates and regularity - not to mention ideas. I don't even want to get into it!
I can't thank you enough for writing this beautiful tale. I'll be sure to share it!
| torvillas971 6/26/12 . chapter 35
You can drag it out! Haha! This story is phenomenal! Sorry I haven't been reviewing regularly (life gets in the way), but I've religiously read this story ever since you started writing it.
I love that Arthur finally had a chance to propose to Gwen, and she accepted! (Of course) Loved their scene in the kitchen!
Thank you so much for sharing! Looking forward to the next installment! : )
| gorgeousangel 6/26/12 . chapter 34
This chapter was a bit hard for me because i am colored and I'm in Zimbabwe Africa where people who used to think coloreds should be treated differently from whites. I did not personally experience it much myself because it was not as common anymore as I was growing up. However, there still remains the effects and the remnants of it all.
Having said that, I think Morgana has gone bananas and it was bound to happen. She s evil and always up to something thing that frightens me is she feels she is justified to break them apart. its hard to change someone's beliefs. so it looks to me there is no hope for this girl.
I love that Arthur is willing to do anything to get to be with Gwen.
| Lily1986 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Oh wow! Finally! He popped the question! Yay! And how awesome is Gwen for thinking so quickly on her feet? It's definitely one of the things I love most about her on the show. I am looking forward to seeing how you'll end this mammoth of a story. And I feel like Elliot could be coming around... He might start shipping Arwen soon like the rest of us. This is definitely a wonderful story. You've really created something special here! Can't wait to see what's next!
| nonasui 6/25/12 . chapter 35
I loved this chapter! Well for obvious reasons :) This story can go on forever. It's so wonderful.
| Romans 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Well, I kind of wouldn't mind it being dragged out just a little bit longer. Great proposal. You are very talented and your grammer teachers taught you well! Your chapters are always well written and the formatting is excellent.
| Guest 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Wow, that was beautiful and the best way he could propose. I can't wait to see how things unfold with the wedding. Morgana is really something else. She may be possessed with voodoo or possessed.. She definitely has the devil in her. I am from the south, can you tell. I love this story because believe it or not race is still an issue here.
| Sleepingmonster02 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Oh my god! This made my heart swell three times its size eeep! They're engaged! This was just amazing! And I love Bobbi, I think she'll be the most supportive and would love the fact that she would kind of sorta be Arthur's sister-in-law. And I know Vivian, is sort of annoying, I still really like her! She's such the comic relief. "Na, I reckon i'm good out here!" i love it! Keep up the good work i can't wait until the next chapter!
| Fantasyfan4ever 6/25/12 . chapter 35
YAY! :D Congrats to the couple! I think you did the proposal perfectly. I'm just scared to find out how everyone else will react to the news. Anyways, spectacular job!
| princessjennifer 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Brilliant. The proposal scene was so nice i just hope they get the happy ending they deserve x
| frompemberley 6/25/12 . chapter 35
Awwwwwwwww... :D My head almost exploded from all the cuteness! And please do drag it out as long as possible. I can't imagine how my life with continue when I no longer have your fanfic to look forward to! :)
| Jamix 6/25/12 . chapter 35
I love this chapter the most! I love this story, your writing, everything(!), but this chapter was soo funny and sweet and I don't know...I love it! Oooooh my gosh, i can't wait till the next chapter be publiced! Thanks for writing this story. I really appreciate your work and the fact, that you take the time and the effort to share your thoughts with us! Thanks a lot!