My younger sister (scarletfireblaze) has asked me to read this story, and I really glad she did. Since I only got an account AFTER you finished the story, I'm just commenting on this chapter. I did notice there weren't many boys in this story, but Scarlet told me there are more boys in the sequel. Really amazing writing; you are a great author and have lots of talent!

-Leo

I absolutely, completely, undeniably, positively loved the ending. I am overjoyed with the amazing ending chapter to this fantastic story.

Thank you for the acknowledgement. I feel special being the only one who had barely a clue of what you were talking about. It's a good thing you're great at explaining things to me.

I can't wait for the sequel.

BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO-O-O-O! :)

No! It WASN'T cheesy! I'm crying right now. If that's not enough to convince you of what a magnificent story that was, tell me how I can, and I'll do it in an instant.

Oh, wow... Wooooowwwww... Moira just joined the heroes' gang. Wake me up when she falls face-first into quicksand and suffers the same slow death that Donna faced. *passes out*

Seriously, though, exciting chapter. Off to read the next one now...

I'm crying. This is so sad and beautiful, and touching... Yes, you've done her justice.

The only reason I haven't reviewed much is that I'm too eager for more of the story to think about what to say in this little box thing. :D By the way, if you get a chance, here's my top wizard's stats...

Rebecca Dreamhunter, level 55 Life - Loves helping friends to finish their quests by fighting alongside them (regardless of school or level); hates when people swear around the filters. Pet: Sea dragon; Lady Luna. (By the way, since you already have a pet named Luna in the story, feel free to change my sea dragon's name to another female name. :)

By the way, are you planning anything in the sequel about Zafaria, Avalon or Azteca? :D

:'( NO! Poor Sylvia... Just the same, I had to realize that was coming. :( Poor dear lady...

I know this is small, but I'm primarily a Life Wizard in the game, so I wasn't overly pleased to see that the one student of Life magic represented thus far was so rude, harsh and prejudiced against her new Death classmate. I see Life as the most friendly and helpful of all seven basic magic schools (basic meaning non-Astral, for obvious reasons), since they can heal their friends in battle so much earlier in their magical education than any other school. I'm sure you didn't mean anything, but I still had to mention it. I hope to see some nice Life Wizards (besides the professor) soon.

All that aside and overall, each chapter has me hooked more tightly than the last. I'm looking forward to reading more! Onward I go... And I loved how Alex and Malistaire teleported. It's so much like the game, it makes me want to save my place here and go play the game myself! But I'm too into this story; I can play later... :D

Poor Alex! Eight years old an on her own, and in Dragonspyre, of all places! :O

I've got to go out in a few minutes, but when I get back home, you can bet I'll keep reading!

If I may, though, the ending Author's Notes are kind of spoiler-ish, saying she'll be in Wizard City for the rest of her life... But oh, well. A fascinating plot, nonetheless! :D

Aww. I was in acknowledgements! XD

May I ask if you're still accepting OCs for the Journey of Fire's Song? Because I have an evil one. XD Sorry.

I'm sad to see this story end... but happy to know it will continue!

Aw thanks! It was a ncie idea to individual address your reviewers. I did have a pretty big reaction to Donna's death, didn't I? x)

I can't wait for Journey of Fire's Song! -scarletfireblaze

It's not a cheesy ending, really! I think it's...symbolic? I don't know, but it connects with your story, and with Donna. Though most people might remember Donna more, I was just wondering...why didn't Alexandra mention Brooke, who died as well. Was it because Brooke was okay with dying after all? I just feel likke something was missing there.

But otherwise, this is pretty much one of the greatest ways you could end the story. I want to read more (and hopefully will be able to in Journey of Fire's Song :D), and I truly believe that the fact Alexandra wan't the "villains" to have memorials as well. I hope sometime in JoFS there is a scene where Alexandra visits the memorial, and we'll get to see where the memorials are located and what they look like.

Since I already know how Donna's mother reacts from chapter 37, I think, I'm curious to know how Brooke's family reacts. They already lost one child, and now Brooke...how sad. And how will Cassie feel about that? Hope to see that in Brooke's backstory.

AWESOME STORY, EPIC FINALE, AMAZING WRITING!
Your fan, scarletfireblaze

I could just tell this chapter was going be about pain before I even started reading it (maybe it was the chapter title that clued me in -_-).

But seriously, I think the entire emotions chapter was necessary, better than the whole "Yeah, we defeated the bad guy everything is happy now" sort of thing. The last line sort of made me, as the reader, kind of finally understand that the adventure was over now, closed everything up. It was a nice conclusion to the chapter.

As always, your writing is awesome, and I'm a big fan! :D
-scarletfireblaze

AUGH!
Sorry, just had to get that out of my system. :)

Anyways...YES! EPIC MALISTAIRE-ALEXANDRA SHOWDOWN CHAPTER! To be honest, it was shorter than I expected, and way more awesome! Lots of emotions, realistic, and suspenseful! I didn't realize Malistaire would be so hard to kill for Alexandra, who's supposedly "heartless". :'(

(Sorry this review is late, by the way! I've been busy with stuff.)
Keep up the great writing, and I really can't wait for Journey of Fire's Song!
-scarletfireblaze