   Kokoroyume 1/30/12 . chapter 1I liked it ! That was a great story :)
Thank you ! |
| CountryGrl 10/16/11 . chapter 1 Heh heh heh. Such fun. |
| InterruptingDinosaur 8/17/11 . chapter 1 I was keeping my fingers crossed as a read this, then when I read the very end I thought, "Damn, girl, you led me on!" But, nonetheless, a very charming story. It made me laugh at all the right times, and the analogies were wonderfully descriptive. |
| George2Bob1 5/23/11 . chapter 1 very funny |
| Allie Chick 5/16/11 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness. I nearly died of laughter! |
| DarthJackie 5/14/11 . chapter 1 hahahahaha! That was great! Love it. |
| Sffgcddrtfcvbhh 5/14/11 . chapter 1 HAHA! |
| rawriloveyou 5/14/11 . chapter 1 Hilarious. Loved it; characters were perfect. |
| mustangwoman 5/14/11 . chapter 1 Delightful story! I love the Goldilocks analogy and the image of John slowly realizing where he is. I also love seeing Sherlock’s caring side and his reaction when trying to process the softer emotions. I can’t help but wonder what his thoughts were when he realized John’s misunderstanding of what transpired between them during the night; what thoughts caused the “young eyes”. The ending was so perfectly Sherlock! Thank you for sharing this! |
| goldvermilion87 5/14/11 . chapter 1 Hehe! That was cute! |
| lonewolfe001 5/14/11 . chapter 1 that was sweet. Please continue |
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