I can't add anymore than what has already been said. A fantastic, epic story that was well written and developed.

I can't add anymore than what has already been said. A fantastic, epic story that was well written and developed.

Rereading all these stories again, been fun. however have noticed a nasty trend. You have 14 stories totalled and yet it appears you have abandon all of them to some extent.

EMERGENCY Question: If the Photon Torpedoes, MEdium Yield, are 40 Megatons, then a single second of a Sharlin's main cannon should inflict equal damage. So why are the Federation ships so damned OP?

MY 4th read-through and I just noticed that you don't mark your stuff Complete.

Why don't you?

This is a work of maigic. Understated concerning the tech POV, but seems to be seemless with the two genres. I am loving this and AlbertG, please I am real thirsty :)

Ha! it looks like The Vorlons aren't as foolish as I thought. If they are sensible to fear a force of nature like Guinan, then perhaps they aren't all brainless after all...I wonder if The Shadows are just as sensible...

your have created an outsanding cross over story and in do so have also add something new to the table which is hard to do when writing fanfiction.

This has been a long but good story I think it will be interesting to see how the rest goes.

Trife

Just gotta love the contact part. I love how Garrett ends contact by saying "Rochester, nice meeting you. Good bye." I probably would have been tempted to stand my ground, and if they tried to board, I probably would have been tempted to deck them. But I would have just settled with saying that even though we lost contact with our colony, we maintain our form of government and laws to the best of our abilities, and therefore maintain our independence from any other government, Earth or otherwise. Therefore, we are not subject to the laws of the current Earth government unless we see fit. If they wanted to scan for illegal cargo and contraband, they are free to do so, but they are not to board unless I give permission, and they are to follow my terms (and I would express that I felt insulted, being accused of carrying illegal cargo-what does this look like, a smuggling ship?). If they are to attempt to board by force, I may view that as an act of aggression, and may respond in kind. I probably would have just settled with firing a warning shot while accelerating to full impulse, then jumped to warp (don't want to pick a fight with them just yet). Good thing that Picard wasn't the one in charge of contact; something tells me he would have had less patience with the Rochester's captain.

Oh, and one more thing: stop describing Starfleet vessels as white. They may range from medium gray to off-white, but most of them are light gray in color. The Enterprise D is an eggshell blue-gray.

Skeet, just reread this - as there nothing else good to read - and find that you've miss calculated the warp speed in this chapter Warp 6 should be 117,600,0 kps

Times it by 60 and then 60 again and you get the 421 billion for an hour not a second

not a nitpick its just that you've edited this story several times since you finished it and i only just noticed it,wanted to let you know so you caoul fix it at a later date.

keep penning!

Wow! Nice!

How could the Ambasaador beam the pilots through their shields?

The term is wary (watchful; being on one's guard against danger) not weary (physically or mentally exhausted by hard work, exertion, strain, fatigued, tired).

And shudder (a convulsive movement of the body, as from horror, fear, or cold) not shutter (a solid or louvered movable cover for a window).

Very impressive. There is a bit of confusion, now and then, where I need to reread a paragraph because the timing of the action sees off of what I just read, but that could very well be me.

I'm really enjoying this so far.