this is really, really good. it's well-written and has potential to develop into a good story, given that you avoid some huge cliches. i hope you update soon!

this is interesting hope you update it again.

i like how you made usagi live on her own instead of being immediately thrown into the lap of luxury by being taken to live with Bulma. Write more _

update soon please!

I think someone already said this, but wow; a decent story in this section. My only question is will it include characters that are usually looked over (IE: Roshi, Yamcha, Tien Shinhan, Chiaotzu, etc.)?

As for place in the stories of both franchises, I can already tell that this is between DBZ and DBGT for the Dragon Ball franchise, but what about for Sailor Moon? In reading the manga, I only got as far as just after the defeat of Pharaoh 90, since after that the scans got really crappy. Where in the franchise does this take place?

nice story you got to make that into a series.

i love how you portray usagi! her inner strength and her struggles as she matures and grows. i hope gohan and videl and vegeta don't give her too of a hard time! love the fic, update soon please!

I really like this story! It's about time someone submitted a story really worth reading in this section. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

-Aurora

This is really well written and I am very much enjoying the story and the concept so far even though it's only been introductions to the characters as yet. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. :) Also, I think a good title would be "Wash Away", as in the Joe Purdy song: "I got troubles oh, but not today/Cause they're gonna wash away/They're gonna wash away..."

Hey there samisweet,

I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story! I also agree how sad it is that people have been leaving the SM section on here. Glad to find a fellow author still appreciating SM and DBZ!

*hugs* Patiently awaiting your update!

I really like this story. I am curious about what happened to her kidnappers, who are they and will they find her again. _ Okay, I'm more curious if they're still looking for her and what they did to her. How did she know about the dragon balls and their power? Ah, I have so many questions, I can't wait to read more! D Great story! Please update soon!

Ah, won't you update? No, pease do, ! ! !

Iiss this category very much. I like where this is going and you have a very nice writing style. Please keep updating, and I will keep reading :)

Yay your back! The SM community has definitely missed you. This is definitely off to a great start. Will there be love in the air? Will she ever get home? And who are these mysterious kidnappers? Can't wait to find out.

On a side note, I completely agree with your AN. I feel sad to see not as many good SM stories around. I end up re-reading some of my old favorites. Hopefully the community will pick it back up. Keep writing and update soon!

Well Gohan always seems to be suspicious.. just looking at this fiction, and wondering where it is going.