|Reviews for Untitled|
| egoist 5/15/12 . chapter 1
this is really, really good. it's well-written and has potential to develop into a good story, given that you avoid some huge cliches. i hope you update soon!
| SilverMidnightKitten 2/25/12 . chapter 2
this is interesting hope you update it again.
| usagi-spice 2/16/12 . chapter 2
i like how you made usagi live on her own instead of being immediately thrown into the lap of luxury by being taken to live with Bulma. Write more _
| hey 11/12/11 . chapter 1
update soon please!
| That Geek 10/23/11 . chapter 2
I think someone already said this, but wow; a decent story in this section. My only question is will it include characters that are usually looked over (IE: Roshi, Yamcha, Tien Shinhan, Chiaotzu, etc.)?
As for place in the stories of both franchises, I can already tell that this is between DBZ and DBGT for the Dragon Ball franchise, but what about for Sailor Moon? In reading the manga, I only got as far as just after the defeat of Pharaoh 90, since after that the scans got really crappy. Where in the franchise does this take place?
| juvonny avery 10/1/11 . chapter 1
nice story you got to make that into a series.
| devafiend 9/2/11 . chapter 2
i love how you portray usagi! her inner strength and her struggles as she matures and grows. i hope gohan and videl and vegeta don't give her too of a hard time! love the fic, update soon please!
| Auorora of Moonblade 8/24/11 . chapter 2
I really like this story! It's about time someone submitted a story really worth reading in this section. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Parsley the Lion 6/23/11 . chapter 2
This is really well written and I am very much enjoying the story and the concept so far even though it's only been introductions to the characters as yet. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. :) Also, I think a good title would be "Wash Away", as in the Joe Purdy song: "I got troubles oh, but not today/Cause they're gonna wash away/They're gonna wash away..."
| Tenshi no Yupiteru 6/12/11 . chapter 2
Hey there samisweet,
I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story! I also agree how sad it is that people have been leaving the SM section on here. Glad to find a fellow author still appreciating SM and DBZ!
*hugs* Patiently awaiting your update!
| Krissy 6/6/11 . chapter 2
I really like this story. I am curious about what happened to her kidnappers, who are they and will they find her again. _ Okay, I'm more curious if they're still looking for her and what they did to her. How did she know about the dragon balls and their power? Ah, I have so many questions, I can't wait to read more! D Great story! Please update soon!
| Waki 6/1/11 . chapter 2
Ah, won't you update? No, pease do, ! ! !
| chibi moon baby 5/16/11 . chapter 2
Iiss this category very much. I like where this is going and you have a very nice writing style. Please keep updating, and I will keep reading :)
| The Cuteness 5/16/11 . chapter 2
Yay your back! The SM community has definitely missed you. This is definitely off to a great start. Will there be love in the air? Will she ever get home? And who are these mysterious kidnappers? Can't wait to find out.
On a side note, I completely agree with your AN. I feel sad to see not as many good SM stories around. I end up re-reading some of my old favorites. Hopefully the community will pick it back up. Keep writing and update soon!
| miz 5/16/11 . chapter 2
Well Gohan always seems to be suspicious.. just looking at this fiction, and wondering where it is going.