|Reviews for Finally|
| Jayden Kelvari 10/8/11 . chapter 1
Barring English grammatical errors (understandable, as you are Indonesian, and English isn't your first language), this is an interesting start to a story. I would be interetsed in seeing how this story would progress, and what characters - if any - would also be re-introduced if this story were allowed to continue. How would Asato, Mayumi, and the other girl get along? Would there be a reincarnation of Lynx/Kuroneko? Or what about Harle/Tsukoyomi?