Hi Taz,
First of all, great story. Although I have to agree with some of the reviews. I too feel that the story was a little rushed, could have done with a little more detail.
Keep up the good work.

LOL! Great surprise ending! I liked this....M's thoughts were very real. (although i couldn't help but feeling that the transitions were a little rushed...)

This had a great plot. I only think you should've made the "fight" between Marguerite and Mar a little longer and more detailed. GREAT job, though! Keep writing. :) :) :)

YAY!!! that was good!!! :o)

Great story, Taz! Like it a lot!

very cute