Hey you,

I found this story, and its prequel, to be very sweet, and I would have adored them if it werent for the pairings. I am rather stuck on my versions of Serah Hawke and Bethany, and in my head the only way to pair them off involving these two boys is Hawke/Anders and Bethany/Sebastian - I cant imagine the other way around. Sowwy.

Hugs,

Adara

i 3 Papa Hawke! you should make a full story with him!

I love over-protective daddy Malcolm!

Once again Daddy to the rescue lol. What a hoot. Loved it. I do wish you'd consider a full story using Malcolm rather than Leandra as the surviving parent or even with both.

Poetic licence is allowed I reckon especially for a good story. It wouldn't take it too far from the game and then we'd have fun with Daddy and Gamlen too.

Thanks for sharing

Take care

Naomi xxx

I'll review this one because it's the first I read and I'm in my 'yay Bethany!' mood

but all the pieces of this little AU really are adorable!

your Malcolm Hawke is incredibly funny (and I love sebastian reaction when Anders is mentioned XD)

Fenris/Carver, I wouldn't have put much thought in this couple but you did this well (it's still strange to see Fenris taking charge but well... I suppose that with Carver it's to be expected... I swear sometimes I wonder which one of him or Merril is the most oblivious one (well..; Merrill might still win that one )

anyway it was really cute and pleasat to read !

I like your Anders! You should play with him more often. 3 Finally got around to favorite authoring you, you're awesome! Find my prompts next, imo. :D

Yup, Papa Hawke is pretty badass. He reminds me of my dad, only instead of fireballs he uses a Winchester...

I love all your stories, whether they are Anders!fluff or Sebastian!anything. Lol. I couldn't think of a name for my next Hawke, and I named her after you! Lol. Not Celeste, but Lywinis! Again, thank you for such awesome stories, and a request? MOAR Seb limericks please! Thank you!