Good chapter, good chapter, dearie!
Stupid Ranma is stupid. But would I have done the same thing? Quite possibly.
I eagerly await the next chapter. Great things are still to come!

wow! im really enjoying this! i cant help but recall miaka yearning for tamahome! oh what she must have felt! :( cant wait for the next installment! :) (and they havent even kissed yet! i guess, it's still ranma x akane)

Uh oh! _ Akane's always getting into trouble, huh?

Good update, my friend. I'm still not totally sold on Shampoo's willingness to let Akane die, but that's okay. And admittedly, showing how bad things really got for Shampoo does help demonstrate how her heart has hardened. (Though to that end: "After everything she has done for me, this is how I repay her. " What did she do to Shampoo, really? She never betrayed her. And also, "tarnish her Amazonian laws"? I don't understand what you mean by that.)

Everything else was great, though. Cologne and Nabiki, Happosai, everything with Ranma…lots of fun. Thanks for the new chapter. I really enjoyed it and, as always, I look forward to more!

oh my gosh what will happen to Akane! This chapter is filled with a lot of suspense...I was having fun reading it!:) I felt all freaked out when I read about what what happened to shampoo! This is such a great story!:)

Good four chapters

Great work! Shampoo was almost raped and now she wants Akane's death but I don't believe Shampoo really loves Ranma Herb saved her no Ranma ! It's normal She now hates both (no only Akane) and wants break them but I don't like this! I'm happy you added originals scenes and I hope there will be more of this! I've read fushigi yuugi but I like last part because I don't know what will happen next! Update whenever you can but I hope soon

Well, it's lovely to see more of this, though I'm not sure I'm entirely down with what happened here. Shampoo…I dunno. Her betrayal just felt really, really fast to me. I mean, it's within minutes, basically.

However, everything else was pretty great. It was a solid chapter on the whole…it just felt to me like more time should have passed between embracing Akane and wanting her dead. That's all. But I look forward to more! Thanks for the update.

Great chapter!Now I really want to know what happens in the next chapter, Good work! Thanks for the update

Ahh! You left me hanging! :) Good story, amazinggg. :) waiting for your next update! Good job!

Good work, good work. Though I'm starting to get ticked at Akane and her constant attempts to go off qnd deal with things on her own. Sheesh.

But this was a great update. I look forward to seeing what happens between Akane and Shampoo.

Now I have to catch up on Yearning. Thanks for updating!

Beautiful chapter! I hope you update soon this or Yearning Please

And it's Shinnosuke with the save! Neat. Though it doesn't make sense to tell us a character's name before it's actually revealed by the events of the story. So Shinnosuke and Monlon shouldn't really be referred to by name until they've identified themselves. Does that make sense?

But it was a nice episode, and I was quite glad to see a new chapter. Now, I'm most looking forward to seeing more of KA. Think we might get some more of that pretty soon?

Thanks for the update, my friend. I hope your holidays went well. Until next time!

Great chapter! Ranko is so sweet and Ranma is in love!

That was a GREAT chapter! I hope this story gets updated again soon!:) wonder who else I going to show up?:)

GOOD LUCK!:)

The ending is sad but all in all it great!:) I Noticed you put parts of the first movie in there! Nice choice!:) so Shampoo is the other preistess? Interesting so now they're rivals either way!:)

Good luck!:)