A great poem fic. Very well written.

Hey, this sure is swell! I especially like "I strangled you, my love"...it has the ring o' summat that Gollum/Smeagol WOULD actually say! Nice 'un.

Please warn people if this is slash.

a sad poem, but well written. on some level, gollum facinates me, and i can see that you feel the same way. he's such an interesting part of the story. he's almost like a warning.

this is is an excellent poem your really talented honest! keep writing best i read

HOLY SHNIZA, A SMEAGOL/DEAGOL SLASH FIC!

WHAT A FREAKIN' COOL IDEA! I'M LOVIN' IT!

This was really good..I'm not sure if it was supposed to be a slash but that's how I saw it and it was really good.

Okay, now I must go off to bed. GOD NIGHT!

So powerful and strong, but yet so sad and in some way sweet. Poor Smeagol and poor Deagol!

You did a great job!

JadeFox

Poor poor Deagol. This is the third fic I have read in my quest to get inside Smeagol's mind and it never ceases to amaze me. I hope my next Gollum POV fic will live up to ppl's expectations. From what I'm reading these are very good. I've never tried Gollum POV and now I'm somewhat afraid to for fear of failure

You know what?

There are so few stories about Gollum and Smeagol, it's sad.

In reality, he is definately one of the most symbolic and pervacious

characters out there, and everyone is writing trash.

I salute you, chap.

Excellent work.

Ahhh Ali. you wrote a LoTR Songie! XD! Soo good. you know I love your writings. I was surprised to find this tho. Lovely.

::Crokes like Gollum::

Aak... creepy and powerful. Very nicely done.

awww that does Sméagol really well, even though I'm not sure boot the gay thing, but oh well! Ambivalence is good, ambivalence is Sméagol.

wow! this was such a great poem...well written and all that! right on!

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