Reviews for Lines of Destiny

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Omote 2008-04-17 ch 3,	abuseThe godesses have rules? That makes so much sense.(note the sarcasem.) why would they have rules when they can do anything they want. And didnt they leave the world in the sacred realm not live there.
Papa Nuhf 2007-04-03 ch 3,	abusei just gotta say, wow, that was damn good. i can't wait until you start on this story. i really wanna see how it ends.
someone who does not exist 2004-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abusethat were an excellent story and Saria is a very superior homosapien for Link than Zelda
Pata Hikari 2004-09-29 ch 3,	abuseNO! PLEASE! Continue this fic!
shadow 2003-07-01 ch 3, anon.	abusewow! i really liked your story! (sorry; couldn't resist) well, there were a few spelling/grammatical errors, but nothing too distracting. i liked the way you really went in depth with the characterization; some people don't, and it gets really annoying. very artfully done. thank you.
Garmi 2003-06-03 ch 2,	abuseWell, ff.net won't let me review for chapter 3, so this will have to do. First things first, I love this story! I read the whole thing in one sitting- with a break, now that's devotion. ^_^ This is definately a great story and you know exactly what you're doing so I won't give you any advise. Also, I know that you just updated and that your chapters are 10,0 or so words, but I can't wait for the next part! Especially with my summer break starting.
........ 2003-05-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is a truly wonderful piece of fiction you have written here. 'Twould be nice to see this continued, as the sheer quality of the writing and story aren't often matched on this site.
Lickmaflaminlamabitch 2003-05-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseFamboulous! FANTASTIC! BEAUTIFUL! I loved it, great piece here man!
Caleb Nova 2003-03-13 ch 3,	abuseA good story, I enjoyed it.
schell21 2003-01-03 ch 3,	abuseWow. You have really written one masterful fic here! I can only describe this fic as extremely tense and nerve racking. The words fit extremely well with a cinamtic style and a lot of drama. Almost the feel of Lord of the rings or something! I will certainly look out for more chapters.
Blitz Blazer 2002-12-17 ch 3,	abuseone of the greatest Zelda fan fics of this type i have ever read! And believe me ive read almost all four thousand out there! You are a very talented writer when it comes to this sort of thing, there were only a few mistakes throughout the whole thing but it was great! I was stunned to find one of such high caliber and this doesnt just go for the 3 chapters its for the whole thing! It was just amazing and creative and aweing all at the same time but still staying true to the normal elements of Link and Saria as you knew them from their time in game. You have the class of a true author, dont stop writing keep doing it and I cant wait for the next chapters of this
Natsu1 2002-12-01 ch 3,	abuseWah! I know, I'm sorry I'm reviewing every chapter, that must get annoying! But I would REALLY like to see the next chapter to this soon, this is already like one of my favorite stories on this site! There are so many little curiosities, like Ruto and Darunia's thingy, the kid claiming to be Link and Saria's, and the fairies! Will we see more of Tatl? Please update soon!
Natsu1 2002-12-01 ch 2,	abuseAwesome, the the Fierce Deity Mask is my favorite! This story is great, the plot has got me hooked!
Natsu1 2002-12-01 ch 1,	abuseI'm just getting around to start reading this And wow, your writing is excellent. Its awesome that this is Link/Saria, you just don't ever get to see enough of that. The plot is also great, because its fresh, and the emotion you can put in with your words is inspiring. I guess I'll go read the next chapter now.
Forest Girl Kaz 2002-11-28 ch 3,	abuseyour story is so good please do more quickly.

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