Bravissimo! But are you sure Jo and Ilya are related? Admitting her injuries? Maybe a half sister! ;-) You are really doing some wonderful writing and I look forward to each alert! Keep up the terrific work!

great chapter and a nice hint of things to come!

nice job and great flow to the story...looking forward to the next chapter

yeah bay-bee you did it! Well done with the re-writes. Am very proud of what you did with this chapter! You own this big time! Well done!

this is building nicely. good cliffhanger at the end. Looking forward to the next chapter.

thanks for the shout out! I was glad to be of help. This is coming along nicely! Good job!