the story was pretty good, but i think i like your funny sappy stories better. i think you made him give in to trying to get help to easily, people who live trough stuff like that try to hide their secrets as much as possible or denies it, but i guess its different for every one.

i like how u understand me. i like this whole sucide stuff, just reading it, makes me understand why people do it!

wow

this was really good :):) i think u should make a longer story out of this one... like drag it out more (not in a boring sense) awesome! i cant wait to read more of ur stuff :):):):)

That was good! I enjoyed it! You're such a good writer!

more of this sort

I really loved your stroy. This story reminded me of well how can I say this- me. The only thing is that I do not have one big bad person, but more people. I was crying in the middle of the story, and I want to thank you for writing such a great story. It personally touched my heart.

well put story.

wwrite more.