GIMME SOME OF THAT BRAIN BLEACH.

I mean, honestly this is even worse than My Immortal. At least My Immortal didn't have as bad grammar (ugh, did I really just say that?). This one - ugh - can't even understand it.

This is just...
No words. I have no words.

This is beautiful.

In could use some of that Brain Bleach O.o

Funny commentary . Though I have a headache trying to figure out what the auothor of imma wiserd is saying! XD

I didn't think there was a fanfic worse than My Immortal...but imma wiserd kicks My Immortal's vampire butt!

Oh God...my faith in humanity is dead! Dead as Dumbledore! D:

Your Life With Ron Weasley? Do I even want to know?

YESSSSS! DEATH! *Cheering crowd* That was the BEST part of the entire fic. This 'imma wiserd' fic is an epic fail. It's just as bad as 'Rosemarylln and her story'. Ugh. Very good, entertaining commentary. So you are awesome, my friend. Very awesome indeed.

ARGH!THE MENTAL IMAGES ARGH**

1 EPIC FAIL

hahaa lol this is funny

Ooh yipee he's dead! But something tells me he's going to be magically alive in the next chapter :(

s/6997402/1/

ITS THE NEW MY IMMORTAL! that girls gotta be a troll.

-.- Why do I feel that this death is not a permanent condition?

And personally, I put it on par with My Immortal. Roughly the same number of spelling and grammar mistakes, and replace "hating" on "goffics" with being "rassist." At least this doesn't have literally paragraphs of discription of the character's clothing.

You'd give it a 1?… I think i'd give it a zero xD... I barely understood what they were trying to say... This defintely is much worse than My Immortal. Haha. I tried reading My Immortal because my friend told me but I stopped when it got horrible... So around Chapter One... Lol. Whoever wrote this... How old is he/she?